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Good day! Help me please to correct my text thank you If you go to any on the Chinese parks you would definitely see a lot of empty china bottles on the tables near the small shops.

What is this?

After talking to a salesman I found out:

This is a traditional Beijing food

It has being producing in Beijing for over 100 years

The bottle is refundable. You get 1 yuan back if you return the bottle.

The price is 5 RMB if you drink it right on the bat and 6 RMB for a take away.

And the number is empty bottles tells me locals love to drink it.

Term of storage: 7 days

Net weight: 180 gr

List of ingredients: raw milk, sugar, honey 0.2%, food additives (lemon iced, E950, E401, E1442)

Please watch my video to find out is it delicious if disgusting

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Good day! Help me please to correct my text thank you

If you go to any on of the Chinese parks in China you would definitely see a lot of empty china (Is china bottle a specific type of bottle? If not, just say "empty bottles) bottles on the tables near the small shops.

What is this?

After talking to a salesman I found out:

This is a traditional Beijing food

It has being producing been produced in Beijing for over 100 years

The bottle is refundable. You get 1 yuan back if you return the bottle.

The price is 5 RMB if you drink it right on the bat away and 6 RMB for a take away.

And the number is  of empty bottles tells me locals love to drink it.

Term of storage: 7 days

Net weight: 180 gr

List of ingredients: raw milk, sugar, honey 0.2%, food additives (lemon iced, E950, E401, E1442)

Please watch my video to find out is if it delicious if or disgusting

1

Good day! Help me please to correct my text thank you

If you go to any on the Chinese parks in China, you would will definitely see a lot of empty china bottles on the tables near the small shops.

What is this?

After talking to a salesman I found out:

This is a traditional Beijing food

It has been being producing in Beijing for over 100 years

The bottle is refundable. You get 1 yuan back if you return the bottle.

The price is 5 RMB if you drink it right on the bat and 6 RMB for a if you take it away.

And the number is of empty bottles tells me locals love to drink it.

Term of storage: 7 days

Net weight: 180 gr

List of ingredients: raw milk, sugar, honey 0.2%, food additives (iced lemon iced, E950, E401, E1442)

Please watch my video to find out is it delicious if disgusting -->  how delicious it is, even if a little disgusting!

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