my future in ten years
In ten years, I hope I'll accomplish several goals. One, of these goals is, I hope to finish my studies in gastronomy and I want to starting my own restaurant in Paris.
Also, I hope I'll have to traveled to at least
five countries, for example: Brazil, Peru, Spain, USA and France, I think that it's very important to know new cultures and customs for developing new dishes that will improve the gastronomy in Colombia.
Other goal is, I would like to learn three lenguages more, for example: Portuguese, Italian and french; this due to the lenguages is a factor very important to became an excellent chef.
For other part, I would like to create an animal foundation with my mom, because, we have been sharing this dream since four years ago, always we have been loving to the animals, we want to buy a huge house for picking up animals of the streets.
Too, I hope I'll have to lived in France with my boyfriend, , in this moment, we have been three years, and, we would like to get married in four years, he wants to work in a luxury hotel and, he wants to be an important chef.
But, my main goal in ten years is to be happy and I hope to be surrounded by people that love me ,and, I want to provide a good welfare to my mom.
I hope I'll have accomplished these goals in ten years
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my future in ten years
In ten years, I hope to have accomplished (or: I hope I will have accomplished) several goals. One, of these goals is to finish my studies in gastronomy and to open my own restaurant in Paris.
I also hope to have traveled to at least five countries, for example: Brazil, Peru, Spain, USA and France. I think that it's very important to know ne
w cultures and customs in order to develop new dishes that will improve the gastronomy in Colombia.
Another goal is, I would like to learn three more lenguages; Portuguese, Italian and French, as knowing other languages is a very important factor in becoming an excellent chef.
For other part, In addition, I would like to create an animal foundation with my mom. We have been sharing this dream for four years. We have always loved animals, and we want to buy a huge house and pick up (stray) animals off the streets and house them there.
Too, I hope to have lived (I hope that I'll live/ I hope that I will have lived) in France with my boyfriend. in this moment, we have been together for three years, and we would like to get married in four years. He wants to work in a luxury hotel and, he wants to be an important chef.
But, my main goal in ten years is to be happy, and I hope to be surrounded by people that love me ,and, I want to provide my mom with some security/to provide a home for my mom/to provide for my mom.
I hope I'll have accomplished these goals in ten years.
Note: normally, you don't put a comma after the word "and" or "but"
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