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Venezuelans, the largest migration in Colombia’s history In Venezuela, hyperinflation has reached a historical record, after finishing this year it will be 1,000,000% as revealed by the projections of the international monetary fund, this has permitted the increase of the migration in this country, leading Venezuelans to ask for help in the borders of different countries, mainly Colombia; since being a solidary country does not ask for requirements to cross the border, thus supporting more and more Venezuelans, leading them to leave aside the situation and food problems that the country itself presents.

On one hand, in Venezuela, inflation has increased and, the daily life for low-income families that have always depended on a salary, has made that it be difficult to maintain their priority needs, thus generating the abandonment of their homes to go to other countries in search of alternatives to meet their basic and individual needs for their other family. This has caused that Colombia lives today the biggest migration phenomenon "in its history" because of the Venezuelan crisis and the bad administration of the government.

Migration has become a strong social problem in Colombia because, in the beginning it was not so remarkable, but as time goes, in cities such as Cúcuta, Bucaramanga, Bogotá, which are main capitals and mainly in the warm earth towns are the most affected populations by this humanitarian crisis and where more Venezuelan children, women, and men have arrived; who are forced to sleep on the platforms, in the parks because of the economic situation in their country. These people are surviving from what good-hearted people give them when they ask for alms at traffic lights, in the streets or selling sweets, in the same way they work on whatever they get; severely affecting employment for natives, because employers take advantage of the situation they hire them in exchange for a place to live, or for food.

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Venezuelans, the Largest Migration in Colombia’s History   [In titles always capitalize the first, last, and all important words.]

In Venezuela, hyperinflation has reached a historical record, and after finishing this year it will be 1,000,000% as revealed by the projections of the international monetary fund. This has caused the increase of migration out of this country, leading Venezuelans to ask for help at the borders of neighboring countries, mainly Colombia. And since being a solitary[??] country Columbia does not ask for requirements to cross the border, thus attracting more and more Venezuelans, leading them to leave aside the situation and food problems that their own country* itself presents.

On one hand, in Venezuela inflation has increased and the daily life for low-income families that have always depended on a salary has made it difficult to maintain their priority needs, thus generating the abandonment of their homes to go to other countries in search of alternatives to meet their basic and individual needs for their other[??] family. This has caused Colombia today to have the biggest migration phenomenon "in its history" because of the Venezuelan crisis and the bad administration of the** government.

Migration has become a strong social problem in Colombia because in the beginning it was not so remarkable, but as time goes by, in cities such as Cúcuta, Bucaramanga, Bogotá, which are department capitals and mainly in the warmer climate are the most affected populations of this humanitarian crisis and where more Venezuelan children, women, and men have arrived who are forced to sleep on platforms in the parks because of the economic situation in their country. These people are surviving from what good-hearted people give them when they ask for alms at traffic lights, in the streets or selling sweets, and in the same way they work on whatever they get, this severely affects employment for natives, because employers take advantage of the situation they hire them in exchange for a place to live, or for food.

[* The phrase "the country" is ambiguous, because the reader doesn't know if Columbia also has these problems or not. I assume you mean Venezuela, so I added "their own" to make this more clear.

** Again, "the" is ambiguous. You are talking about two different countries. The reader may assume that you think the Columbian government is bad for letting so many refugees in, see? If you mean the Venezuelan government you should write: "of the Venezuelan government."]

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