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1st day in Perth I arrived in Perth in the early morning. As soon as landing, I went to a carousel to collect my luggage. I waited pretty long. Maybe that's because I checked in too early. My luggage must have been in the corner of the airplane. But I went through immigration fast. So it took about 30 minutes to get out of the immigration checkpoint. Then I bought a sim card and a calling plan on Vodafone. I got my Australian number. But after I got my accommodation, I tried to make an international call, it didn't work. I will have to visit Vodafone and determine why it doesn't work. The app won't be install, too. Maybe I should've get one in Optus. Vodafone is 30 minutes walking distance from my accommodation. It would be helpful in my health. I also had a cup of coffee which is called 'long black.' It was much softer than Korean americano. It was impressive. I will be likely to have it often from now on. I have heard that Australia is famous for coffee, especially Melbourne. I realize that it is true. And then I call a taxi on Uber which is very convenient and useful. I can check a fare in advance. So taxi drivers can't rip off tourists. The taxi I called came in 5 minutes. It took me to the house I booked on AirBnb. It didn't take long but the driver was not kind. He pointed out my English. So I rated him low. I gave him 3 out of 5.

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1st Day in Perth (capitalize all major words in the title)

I arrived in Perth in the early morning. As soon as landing, I went to a carousel to collect my luggage. I waited pretty long for a long time. Maybe that's because I checked in too early. My luggage must have been in the corner of the airplane. But I went through immigration fast. So it took about 30 minutes to get out of through the immigration checkpoint.
Then I bought a sim card and a calling plan on Vodafone. I got my Australian number. But after I got to my accommodation (or: room/  hostel/ hotel/ guesthouse < sounds a little more natural), I tried to make an international call, but it didn't work. I will have to visit Vodafone to determine (or: ...to see...)why it doesn't work. The app won't be install, too. The app won't even install. Maybe I should've get one in gotten Optus. Vodafone is 30 minutes walking distance from my accommodation. It would be helpful in  good for my health.
I also had a cup of coffee which is called 'long black.' It was much softer than a/ the Korean Americano. It was impressive. I will be likely to have it often from now on. I have heard that Australia is famous for coffee, especially Melbourne. I realize that it is true.
Then, I called a taxi on Uber which is very convenient and useful. I can check the fare in advance. So taxi drivers can't rip off tourists. The taxi I called came in 5 minutes. It took me to the house I booked on AirBnb. It didn't take long, but the driver was not kind. He pointed out my (mistakes in) English. So I rated him low. (I gave him a low rating, just 3 out of 5). I gave him 3 out of 5.
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Sam S / No. That's not a favor. That was a impolite remark. He's not my teacher. You are so rude as him. It's a relieve that you are not my teacher. Thank God.
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The driver was doing you a favor, teaching you better English for free.

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