05102018(Writing Practice)The Strange Question
The 4-year-old John ran up to house.
"Mom, do you know Jack's neck?"
His mom didn’t answer this nonsense question.
"Mom, I said--do you know Jack's neck?"
"Oh, yes," his mom gave up, "I think I know Jack's neck. What's wrong?"
"Oh, he just jump into pond and the water to his neck."
And two more sentences:
1.At the scene of pop concert, all the fans is crazy.
2.Mr. Bruce, you can’t get away, we put a man on all the exits.
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05102018(Writing Practice)The Strange Question
The 4-year-old John ran up to the house."Mom, do you know Jack's neck?"
His mom didn’t answer this nonsensical question.
"Mom, I said, do you know Jack's neck?"
"Oh, yes," his mom gave up, "I think I know Jack's neck. What's wrong?"
"Oh, he just jumped into the pond and the water is up to his neck."
And two more sentences:
1.At (the scene of) the pop concert, all the fans is are crazy. (Unnecessary)
2.Mr. Bruce, you can’t get away, we have put a man on all the exits.
Well done.
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