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Brazil Is A Beautiful Coutry, But... I love my country, Brazil. Brazil has so many awesome landscapes, has beautiful people in all senses of that word. Brazilians are hospitalitable, always want to help someone that is in trouble. Most of brazilians are humble and work a lot. Brazilians has a good mood, it is easy to make a brazilian to smile and certainly he will make you smile too. Brazilians are smarts and inteligents. We have the best soccer players in the soccer history and we have the biggest hydroelectric plant in terms of power generation. If you don't know a brazilian, I think you are leaving aside an opportunity to have a great friendship. Despite of those qualities of brazilians, Brazil has a lot of problems. I think the biggest problem is corruption. There is much corruption in the government. A lot of money coming from taxes that have been payed by brazilians is deviated toward politicians' pockets. It causes serious problems in the education, health and security areas. Violence is another serious problem, if you google about violence in the Rio de Janeiro you will see horrible things like firefight between cops and bandits everyday. We are near of presidencial elections. I hope the next brazilian president is be able to govern Brazil in a honest way and treat brazilian people with dignity. I hope Brazil will be a better place for all brazilians.

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Brazil Is A Beautiful Coutry, But...

I love my country, Brazil. Brazil has so many awesome landscapes, it  has beautiful people in all senses of that word. Brazilians are hospitable, always wanting to help someone that is in trouble. Most Brazilians are humble and work hard. Brazilians are mostly a good mood, it is easy to make a Brazilian smile and certainly he will make you smile too. Brazilians are smart and intelligent. We have the best soccer players in entire soccer history and we have the biggest hydroelectric plant in terms of power generation. If you don't know a Brazilian, I think you are leaving aside an opportunity to make  a great friendship. Despite those qualities of Brazilians, Brazil has a lot of problems. I think the biggest problem is corruption. There is much corruption in the government. A lot of money coming from taxes that have been payed by Brazilians is deviated toward politicians' pockets. It causes serious problems in the education, health and security areas. Violence is another serious problem. If you google violence in  Rio de Janeiro you will see horrible things like firefights between cops and bandits everyday. We are near of presidential elections. I hope the next Brazilian president will be able to govern Brazil in a honest way and treat the Brazilian people with dignity. I hope Brazil will be a better place for all Brazilians

You wrote an interesting text about a country with such riches and problems. When I was in Rio a few times in 1968, it was an easy going people who cared. Even in the favelas where I spent some time was a lot better than the Bronx (New York). But then times change.

Truth and democracy had turned into propaganda and mercantilism where corruption reigns.  

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