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My name is Vitality, I am 28. I live in Russia, in Samara. I work in a big electronic store as a stock man. I am checking and give out stuff for customers.
I started study English in a school. But now I decited to level up. I found Dmitriy Petrov's training courses on YouTube. Petrov's is a polyglot, he tell about characteristics language. To date I finished eleventh lesson.
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Hi.
My name is Vitality, I am 28 years old. I live in Russia, in Samara. I work in a big electronic store as a stock man. I check and give out stuff for customers.
I started studying English in a school. But now I decited to level up. I found Dmitriy Petrov's training courses on YouTube. Petrov's is a polyglot, he talks about languages characteristics. Today I finished the eleventh lesson.
My name is Vitality, I am 28 years old. I live in Russia, in Samara. I work in a big electronic store as a stock man. I check and give out stuff for customers.
I started studying English in a school. But now I decited to level up. I found Dmitriy Petrov's training courses on YouTube. Petrov's is a polyglot, he talks about languages characteristics. Today I finished the eleventh lesson.
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Hi.
My name is Vitality, I am 28 years old. I live in Russia, in Samara. I work in a big electronic store as a stock man. I check and give out stuff for customers.
I started studying English in a school. But now I decited to level up. I found Dmitriy Petrov's training courses on YouTube. Petrov's is a polyglot, he talks about languages characteristics. Today I finished the eleventh lesson.
My name is Vitality, I am 28 years old. I live in Russia, in Samara. I work in a big electronic store as a stock man. I check and give out stuff for customers.
I started studying English in a school. But now I decited to level up. I found Dmitriy Petrov's training courses on YouTube. Petrov's is a polyglot, he talks about languages characteristics. Today I finished the eleventh lesson.
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please, check my text
Hi.My name is Vitaly and I'm 28. I live in Russia, in Samara. I work in a big electronic store as a stock clerk. I check for and get stuff for customers.
I started studying English in school. But now I've decided to level up. I found Dmitriy Petrov's training courses on YouTube. Petrov is a polyglot. He talks about the characteristics of language. To date, I've finished eleven lessons.
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(1) "My name is Vitaly, I'm 28." is incorrect because it consists of two complete sentences, separated by a comma. We call that a "run-on sentence" in English. You have to separate such sentences with a period (.), semicolon (;) or dash (-) in English. You did the same thing in "Petrov is a polyglot. He..." (2) You should use contractions to make your English more natural. A native speaker would say I'M... not I AM. (3) You use the perfect when you indicate that there has been a change. It's almost like an announcement. For example: I've decided to move to the US. This would be news for your friends and family, so you use the perfect to make it into an announcement. The same thing with "I've finished" - sometimes the perfect is used with a sense of "already" - я уже закончил...
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