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What my friends say about me? My name is Reem , I am from Alain , UAE . I am18 years old , my friends say about me that I am a moody, sensitive and slow . First of all no one perfect , I am the one who needs to be more actual and moderate in her mood , this because I find myself in different mood in the same day , also my friends told me I have different opinions about the same topic or issue . Second , Actually I can see myself perfect but I found out that I really need to be reasonable into my decision because sometimes I am angry quickly without thinking of the issue as I am a sensitive girl , for example I am happy if I appreciated or smiling towards me. Even if I know it is a compliment, so I am happy or sad because of small situations. I am not exactly sure of what I am, but I think I really suffer from some of these characteristics , such as slow , I can’t achieve my duties mostly in time , so I need longer time than the given to finish my duties . Finally , to conclude I believe that your friend are your mirror , so you should take their opinion about yourself into consideration as they are telling you the truth and the only who can give you the right judgment .

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What do my friends say about me?

My name is Reem, I am from Alain, UAE. I am18 years old. My friends say about me that I am a moody, sensitive and slow person.
First of all, no one is perfect. I am the one who needs to be more actual and moderate in her mood, this is because I find myself in different moods in the same day. Also my friends told me I have different opinions about the same topic or issue.
Second, actually I can see myself perfectly but I found out that I really need to be reasonable in my decisions because sometimes I am angry quickly without thinking of the issue as I am a sensitive girl. For example I am happy if I am appreciated or people are smiling towards me. Even if I know it is a compliment, I am happy or sad because of small situations.
I am not exactly sure of what I am, but I think I really suffer from some of these characteristics, such as being slow. I can’t achieve my duties mostly on time, so I need a longer time than the given time to finish my duties.*
Finally to conclude I believe that your friends are your mirror, so you should take their opinion about yourself into consideration as they are telling you the truth and they only are who can give you the right judgment.

[* Or: "I need a longer time than that given to finish my duties", or "I need a longer time than the amount given to finish my duties".

Remember to never have a space before the ending punctuation of a sentence.]

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What do my friends say about me?

My name is Reem, I am from Alain, in the UAE. I am 18 years old, and my friends say about me that I am a moody, sensitive and slow.
First of all no one perfect , I am the one who needs to be more realistic actual and moderate about my in her mood, this because I have/experience find myself in different moods on the same day. also My friends told me I have different opinions about the same topic or issue.
Secondly, Actually I can see myself  as perfect but I found out that I really need to be reasonable into my decision because sometimes I am angry quickly without thinking of the issue as I am a sensitive girl. For example; I am happy if I am appreciated or someone smiles at smiling towards me. Even if I know it is a compliment, so I am happy or sad for small reasons.because of small situations.
I am not exactly sure of what I am, but I think I really suffer from some of these characteristics , such as being slow, I often can’t  complete achieve my duties mostly on time, so I need a longer time than the given to finish my duties .
Finally , To conclude, I believe that your friends are your mirror, so you should take their opinion about yourself into consideration as they are telling you the truth and they are the only people who can see you for who you are/give you an honest opinion. give you the right judgment .
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