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Ryan Tsai
Some English Writing 1.Starting from education, it indicates that although they're all called education, under different educationl methods and systems or with different atmospheres and curriculars, it offen cultivates diversly educational system.

2.With technology becoming advanced, different types of security issue popped out.

3. As the "Internet of Things" emerges, itself has some weaknesses which lead them to be exposed to the danger of being hacked.

4. This taught her a lesson - find an online store which has cooperation of cybersecurity with goverment so she won't lose everything after getting hacked.

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Some English Writing

1. Starting from education, it indicates that although they're all called education, under different educational methods and systems or with different atmospheres and curricula/curriculums, it often cultivates diverse educational systems. [Sorry, but I don't understand this sentence.]

2. With technology becoming advanced, different types of security issues popped out.

3. As the "Internet of Things" emerges, it itself has some weaknesses which lead them to be exposed to the danger of being hacked.

4. This taught her a lesson: find an online store which has a/the cooperation of cybersecurity with government so she won't lose everything after getting hacked.

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