healthy life
The healthy life is happy for all personss in the world , so I think all person want to happy life without deseases . To be healthy in your life and live thebhappy life , you should do some thing l will say to you should eat healthy food such as ,the vegetables , fruit , milk and meat .Dont eat fast food because its very bad for your health and for your body ,the fast food its bad because they are in it more of Harmful oils .Healthy food is very important for a healthy life. We must pay attention to the food we eats and the water we drink. The most importants thing about healthy food is that it must contain all the vital substances like vitamins, proteins,
carbohydrates and fats. every day , you should do some of sport exercises ,such as , play some of sport games . its good for your body and health .dont smoke ,ecause the smoke are very bad for your body , and its very risk for your life .So when you want a happy life without deseases and problems , you should do all things i say to you , and i hope that
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Hi Taim
Hereby the correction of your notebook entry.
Regards
Kaaren
Healthy life(style)
A healthy life(style) is good for everyone in the world, so I think everyone wants to live/have a happy life without diseases. To be healthy in your life and (to be able to) live a happy life, you should do something l will say to you should eat healthy food such as ,the vegetables, fruit, milk and meat. Don't eat fastfood because it's very bad for your health and for your body: the fast food it's bad because it contains they are in it more of harmful oils. Healthy food is very important if you want to have a healthy life. We must pay attention to the food we eats and the water we drink. The most importants thing about healthy food is that it must contain all the vital substances like vitamins, proteins, carbohydrates and fats. Every day, you should do some of sport exercises, such as, practice a type of sport. some of sport games. It's good for your body and health. Don't smoke, because the smoke is/ cigarettes are very bad for your body, and it's very risky for your life. So, when you want a happy life without deseases and problems, you should do all the things I say to you, and I hope that you do.1
Healthy Life [In titles always capitalize the first, last, and all important words.]
The healthy life is happy for all persons in the world, so I think all persons want a happy life without diseases. To be healthy in your life and live the happy life, you should do something, l will say to you that you should eat healthy food such as the vegetables, fruit, milk and meat. Don't eat fast food because it's very bad for your health and for your body. The fast food is bad because in it are more of the harmful oils. Healthy food is very important for a healthy life. We must pay attention to the food we eat and the water we drink. The most important thing about healthy food is that it must contain all the vital substances like vitamins, proteins, carbohydrates and fats. Every day, you should do some kind of sport exercises, such as, play some sport games. It's good for your body and health. Don't smoke because the smoke is very bad for your body, and it's very risky for your life. So when you want a happy life without diseases and problems, you should do all the things I say to you, and I hope that you do.[Remember to never have a space before periods and commas. Always capitalize the first word of a sentence.]
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So what healthy activities do you do?
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