Life is harder for young people now than in the past. Do you agree?
It is generally agreed today that we see the world according to the survivorship bias, so we judge the situation only from one side. Personally, I do not agree that in the past life was easier than now.
First and foremost it concerns the education. Nowadays everyone has the right for a proper studying. The opportunity to get a basic education does not depend on the estate, gender or skin color.
Doubtless, the process of getting work becomes faster and easier and it crosses with the previous point. After graduating from school you can enter any university and your success will depend only on your achievements, personal character traits, and motivation. The same applies to the process of finding a job. I firmly believe that now you can get wharever you want if you make some efforts.
The last but not the least reason is the development of technology, which makes our life more comfortable. Especially we can feel it doing household chores.
To draw the conclusion, the one can say that the grass is greener, but I am happy that I live in our time.
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Life is harder for young people now than in the past. Do you agree?
It is generally agreed today that we see the world according to the survivorship bias, so we judge the situation only from one side. Personally, I do not agree that in the past life was easier than now.
First and foremost, it concerns the education. Nowadays everyone has the right for to a proper studying (... has the right to proper learning). The opportunity to get a basic education does not depend on the one's estate, gender, or skin color.
Doubtless Undoubtedly, the process of getting work becomes faster and easier, and it crosses with the previous point. After graduating from school you can enter any university, and your success will depend only on your achievements, personal character traits, and motivation. The same applies to the process of finding a job. I firmly believe that now you can get whatever wharever you want if you make some efforts.
The last but not the least reason is the development of technology, which makes our life lives (You're talking about individuals' lives here.) more comfortable. , especially (Never start your sentence with "especially," and put a comma before it when trying to emphasize something.) when we are can feel it doing household chores.
To draw the conclusion/In conclusion, the one can say that the grass is greener, but I am happy that I live in our time.
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