Today photo and my own fake story
I feel so glad when I look at this photo, it is very funny. There is a man riding a vintage bike in the left side of the photo, with a wheel bigger than the other one. He has many colour in his clothes, green, red, brown etc. People around him are taking photos while he ride. In the background of the photo, there is another person who has a bike, but a normal one.
The first man probably come here from other country. He doesn't look tired because he has just rested in a vintage hotel. And then, he started to ride his bike early in the morning, because he need to cross all Russia, which is very longer.
People are cold, but he is hot because he is doing exercise, that keep his body in higher temperature than the other people.
We hope he can arrives to his target place!
Wish him lucky!
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Today's photo and my own fake story
I feel so glad when I look at this photo, it is very funny. There iswas a man riding a vintage bike in the left side of the photo, with a wheel bigger than the other one. He hashad many colours in his clothes, green, red, brown etc. People around him arewere taking photos while he was rideriding the bike. In the background of the photo, there iswas another person who hashad a bike, but a normal one.The first man probably comecame here (I think you don't need this) from another country. He doesn'tdidn't look tired because he hashad just rested in a vintage hotel. And then, he started to ride his bike early in the morning, because he needed to cross all Russia, which is very took longer time.
People arewere cold, but he iswas hot because he iswas doing exerciseexercising, that keepkept his body in higher temperature than the other people.
We hope he can arrives to his targeted place (you mean, destination?)!
Wish him lucky!
Be consistent in using the tense: present or past tense.
To describe a picture, using the present tense is good. However, if you retell a story, you can use the past tense, especially when it's based on a real situation. :)
I am not too sure if you retold a real story or just made up a story of a picture, so I used past tense here.
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