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Should university education be free for everyone? IELTS Writing 2 There are many approaches to finance university education in modern world. It can be funded by government or paid by students and the way it does depends on educational system in particular country. As for me, higher education must be provided by budget money and be available for all people. There are several reasons claimed by people who think differently. First, state financing may cause of the decrease in quality of teaching. It is highly likely that lectures and other university staff will have to work more because of a lack of budget money spending on education. Second, opportunity to get free higher education can decline motivation to study hard. Students will take it for granted and not make an effort if they do not feel that it is unique. Despite mentioned drawbacks it also has significant advantages. To begin with equal attitude to people with a different level of income. Free higher education protects low-income families and gives the chance to improve their quality of life. Furthermore, it can lead to scientific achievements. People who have limited resources, an enquiring mind and desire to enter a prestigious university could afford it and continue their career in academic sphere. Last but not least, a lot of people with degree is one of the components of a stable society. It is scientifically proven, that intellectual and well-rounded people are more adaptive and successful in life. To conclude, it is clear that opportunity to get free higher education causes a growth in number of skilled and qualified people. I hope that in the near future there is no country with system of education which involves tuition fees.

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Should University Education Be Free for Everyone? IELTS Writing 2   [In titles always capitalize the first, last, and all important words. Here is a web page that lets you paste in a title and gives you proper capitalization: 'https://capitalizemytitle.com'.]

There are many approaches to finance a university education in the modern world. It can be funded by government or paid by students and the way it does depends on the educational system in each particular country. As for me, higher education must be provided by budget money* and be available for all people.
There are several reasons claimed by people who think differently. First, state financing may cause a decrease in the quality of teaching. It is highly likely that lecturers and other university staff will have to work more because of a lack of budget money being spent on education. Second, the opportunity to get free higher education can decline the motivation to study hard. Students will take it for granted and not make an effort if they do not feel that it is unique.
But despite these mentioned drawbacks it also has significant advantages. To begin with, is an equal attitude to people with a different level of income. Free higher education protects low-income families and gives them the chance to improve their quality of life. Furthermore, it can lead to scientific achievements. People who have limited resources, an enquiring mind and desire to enter a prestigious university could afford it and continue their career in an academic sphere. Last but not least, a lot of people with a degree is one of the components of a stable society. It is scientifically proven that intellectual and well-rounded people are more adaptive and successful in life.
To conclude, it is clear that an/the opportunity to get free higher education causes a growth in the number of skilled and qualified people. I hope that in the near future there is no country with a system of education which involves tuition fees.

[* More natural would be to write something like: "budgeted governmental funds".]

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