A typhoon Comes!
Today is the last day of September. The season is Autumn .It is beautiful season.
But I began to feel sad in autumn since i was old.
Typhoon 24 is approaching my hometown. The rain breeze has gradually become fierce.
I and my husband have prepared to protect our old house.
All wooden shutter were closed. All right thing in our garden were carried in the barn.
My dog is scared and curling himself up under the chair.
I prey that Typhoon will pass before it hurtｓ my hometown.
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A typhoon Comes!
Today is the last day of September. The season is Autumn .It is a beautiful season.But I began to feel sad in autumn since i was old. (not sure what you mean by this sentence)
Typhoon 24 is approaching my hometown. The rain breeze has gradually become fierce.
I and my husband have prepared to protect our old house.
All wooden shutters were closed. ("we closed all the wooden shutters" is better) All right thing (?) in our garden were carried in (into) the barn.
My dog is scared and curling himself up under the chair. (My dog is scared and curled up under the chair.)
I prey (pray) that the Typhoon will pass before it hurtｓ("destroys" is better) my hometown.
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