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Why do I want to visit Australia? In my viewe almost everyone likes traveling and I am not an exception. I have visite a lot of places to interest. But if someone aske me what famous place I would like to visite I would answerr Australia. This country have a large number of unique species in different animals,which you cannot find anywhere on our planet, for example penguins, koalas, and a lot of parrots. I am interested to see these animals in their natural environment. I think that it would be great all people think more about the environment. As for me, I want to do visit this country not onlu as a traveler, but as a particpant of the special organization. The projecte of this organization is directed to students and the young all around the world. And the main goal is to support the populaton of rare species of birds in this area. I will have an oportunity no only to see the place, which I would like to visite but also the chance to help. Another reason why I want to see this country is that the English language is the official language of this country. I think that it would be a great practice for my English. During my participation in this program I will be ablie to improve my speaking skills because I will have to speak English all the time. Thus, despite the fact that I have visited a lot of countries, I am interested in visiting Australia. First is that my English will be better, because I have some speaking problems. The second thing, it is just a great place to be in, because there is unique nature and exotic animals, but what is more important is the fact that I would like not only to enjoy this beauty, but I would also like helping animals, taking part in the special project for students.

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I would love to see Australia too but I am scared of all the animals that can kill me!
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Thanks for correcting my mistakes
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Why do I want to visit Australia?

In my viewe point of view almost everyone likes travelling and I am not an exception.
I have visited a lot of interesting places to interest.
But if someone aske asks me what famous place I would like to visite I would answerr Australia.
This country have has a large number of unique species in of different animals,which you cannot find anywhere on our planet, for example penguins, koalas, and a lot of parrots.
I am interested to see these animals in their natural environment (or habitat).
I think that it would be great  all people think more about the environment.
As for me, I want to do visit this country not onlu only as a traveller, but as a participant of the special organization.
The projecte of this organization is directed dedicated to students and the young all around the world.
And the main goal is to support the population of rare species of birds in this area. I will have an opportunity not only to see the place, which I would like to visite but also the chance to help. Another reason why I want to see this country is that the English language is the official language of this country. I think that it would be a great practice for my English.
During my participation in this program I will be ablie to improve my speaking skills because I will have to speak English all the time.
Thus, despite the fact that I have visited a lot of countries, I am interested in visiting Australia.
First is that my English will be get better, because I have some speaking problems.
The second thing, it is just a great place to be in, because there is are unique nature and exotic animals, but what is more important is the fact that I would like not only to enjoy this beauty, but I would also like helping animals, taking part in the special project for students.


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