Journal #51 Perfume: what your smell says about you
[Summary]
According to Roja Doves, who is a perfume designer, there is a very deep psychological connection between our personality and the kind of smells we like. The smells we experience when we are very young can have a big psychological impact on us even later in life. And odorants can act as the trigger for a particular emotion. Our scent can give off a message about the kind of person we are. And the particular scent gives the impression of being very strong in business. A woody, mossy scent suggests that you are not someone to be messed with. Roja says we shouldn’t underestimate the power of smells.
[Conclusion]
I hardly ever wear any perfume. But I agree with the idea that smells can act as the trigger for a particular emotion. For example, the sweet smell of daphne let me remind my grandmother. There were many daphne in my grandmother’s garden and I often played at her garden in my childhood. When I get this smell, I feel nostalgia and get warm feelings.
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Journal #51 Perfume: what your smell says about you
[Summary]According to Roja Doves, who is a perfume designer, there is a very deep psychological connection between our personality and the kinds of smells we like. The smells we experience when we are very young can have a big psychological impact on us even later in life, and odorants can act as the trigger for a particular emotion. Our scent can give off a message about the kind of person we are, and the one particular scent gives the impression of being very strong in business. A woody, mossy scent suggests that you are not someone to be messed with. Roja says we shouldn’t underestimate the power of smells.
[Conclusion]
I hardly ever wear any perfume. But I agree with the idea that smells can act as the trigger for a particular emotion. For example, the sweet smell of daphne let me reminds me of my grandmother. There were many daphne flowers in my grandmother’s garden, and I often played at in her garden in my childhood. When I get this smell, I feel nostalgia and get warm feelings.
Really great writing! Your English sounds very professional and natural. Here are a couple notes:
* "According to Roja Doves, who is a perfume designer, there is..." It's perfectly fine to include "who is", but you can also leave it out. I think in writing, it's more natural to leave it out. In speech, I don't think it's necessarily more natural.
* In writing, try not to start a sentence with "and". The words "for/and/nor/but/or/yet/so" are used to connect sentences, but not to start them. Remember them with the acronym F.A.N.B.O.Y.S. :)
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