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Personal Statement (1) Being as a current student of International Business School of Anhui University, I have taken all opportunities to obtain the knowledge in different fields wherever my constant schedule may take me. Being confronted with different thoughts and ideas have facilitated in expanding my own prospects. I also relish the challenge of widening my horizons, upgrading myself, and most importantly, base myself in a richly cultured country to learn more about a field that I have the most interest in. This is not a decision made based on a whim, as much consideration has been put into this and I will give my utmost to fulfill my passion.

With the thoughts of studying abroad since my high school, I worked hard as well as researched for some foreign countries in all aspects. Finally, I found U.K. is in possession of excellent academic foundation and pure academic atmosphere. I prefer British education system, focusing on academic research to domestic one with loose education. Consequently, I make the firm determination to have the further study in U.K.

There was an event that left an indelible impression on me which strengthened my resolve to pursue Psychology. During my internship days, one of patients in the hospital was suffering from depression, adversely affecting her daily lifestyle. It was fortunate that after months of therapy, her condition stabilized. What intrigued me throughout this experience was how a mental condition could have such a great impact on one’s life. It also got me interested in researching how these situations can be avoided. In addition, while working in the hospital, my colleagues and I attended many sessions conducted by a famous lecturer regarding the human psyche. The sessions were extremely enriching and we even learned some tips on meditation. In 2016, for a period of two months, I had participated in AIESEC international volunteer camp where I worked as translator and head teacher with foreign volunteers.

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I am a current student of International Business School of Anhui University, I have taken all opportunities to obtain the knowledge in different fields wherever my constant schedule may take me. Being confronted with different thoughts and ideas have facilitated in expanding my own prospects. I also relish the challenge of widening my horizons, upgrading myself, and most importantly, base myself in a richly cultured country to learn more about a field that I have the most interest in. This is not a decision made based on a whim, as much consideration has been put into this and I will give my utmost to fulfill my passion.

With the thoughts of studying abroad since my high school, I worked hard as well as researched for some foreign countries in all aspects. Finally, I found that the U.K. offers excellent academic foundation and pure academic atmosphere. I prefer British education system, focusing on academic research to domestic one with loose education. Consequently, I make the firm determination to have the further study in U.K.

There was an event that left an indelible impression on me which strengthened my resolve to pursue my degree in Psychology. During my internship days, one of patients in the hospital was suffering from depression, adversely affecting her daily lifestyle. It was fortunate that after months of therapy, her condition stabilized. What intrigued me throughout this experience was how a mental condition could have such a great impact on one’s life. It also got me interested in researching how these situations can be avoided. In addition, while working in the hospital, my colleagues and I attended many sessions conducted by a famous lecturer regarding the human psyche. The sessions were extremely enriching and we even learned some tips on meditation. In 2016, for a period of two months, I had participated in AIESEC international volunteer camp where I worked as translator and head teacher with foreign volunteers.

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