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Journal #49 Should schoolchildren have jobs? [Summary] In the UK, children are allowed to work from 13 years old. Jobs which children do their free time are called as Saturday jobs, but they work not only on Saturday. They work short time after school on the weekdays, long time on the Saturday and Sunday. Shop works is a very typical type of Saturday jobs. Saturday jobs is seen almost as a rite in passage in the UK. But the latest statistics in the UK shows that is all changing. In order to work, they need a permit from the authority, and the number being issued has fallen year by year. Employers bemoan the lack of work experience young people have. But teenagers are also facing pressure not to take up part-time jobs and to concentrate on their studies. [Conclusion] I think it is good experience to work while youth. We have to act as occasion on demand at every jobs. Children will learn strictness of job and importance of teamwork through their work. But I’m concerned about employer take an advantage of children. If children are allowed to work, schools must teach them a system of labor contracts.

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Hi Reiko,

Great text, I agree with you on most of your opinions. I hope my corrections help you to improve your English writing process,  

Leandro.


Journal #49 Should schoolchildren have jobs?

[Summary]
In the UK, children under 13 are not allowed to work. Jobs in which children do their free time are called  Saturday jobs, but they don´t only work on Saturday. They work for a short time after school on weekdays, long time on Saturday and Sunday. Shop clerk is a very typical type of Saturday job. Saturday jobs are seen almost as a rite in the UK. But the latest statistics in the UK show that everything is changing. In order to work, they need a permit from the authority, and the number of permits that have been issued has been falling year by year. Employers bemoan the lack of work experience young people have, but teenagers are also facing pressure not to take up part-time jobs and to concentrate on their studies.

[Conclusion]
I think it is good experience to work while you are young. We have to act as occasion on demand at every job. Children will learn strictness at work and the importance of teamwork through it. But I’m concerned about employers taking advantage of children. If children are allowed to work, schools must teach them how labour contracts work.

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