The umbrella and the scissor.
It was raining yesterday and I needed to go to the supermarket to buy dog food. My mom and I have an umbrela for each one, but my mom’s was easier to get so I took that one and went out. I opened it up, but I didn’t realize about one thing I’m gonna mention later.After walking a block, I started noticing there were people looking at me and the umbrella as well. There were a couple of kids who laughed at me. I didn’t have any idea what was that about! But then, I suddenly felt something hanging closet o my right shoulder. I turned back to take a glance, and for my surprise… there was a scissor hanged on the umbrela. I thought “how this s#i@ came here!” I tried to take it off while walking, but it was pretty stuck by a little rope that my mom is used to putting on the scissors she uses for her sewing. I remember the umbrella was close to the basket where she keeps her sewing materials so that the most likely if that it got stuck there. I got at the market, and the guard just saw my weird and original umbrella decoration, and I just played dumb pretending it really was a decoration. When I cameo ut of the supermarket, I took it off of the umbrella, it was kind of complicated actually. I still wonder how that thing got stuck there, unbeliavable! And I wonder how funny I looked with that thing hanging there.
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The umbrella and the scissors.
It was raining yesterday, and I needed to go to the supermarket to buy dog food. My mom and I each have an umbrella for each one, but my mom’s was easier to get to, so I took that one and went out. I opened it up, but I didn’t realize about one thing, I’m gonna which I will mention later. After walking a block, I started noticing that there were people looking at me, and the umbrella as well. There were a couple of kids who laughed at me. I didn’t have any idea what that was that about (I had no idea why)! But then, I suddenly felt something hanging close to (next to) my right shoulder. I turned back to take a glance, and for to my surprise… there was a were a pair of scissors hanged hanging on the umbrella. I thought, “how did this s#i@ came get here!?” I tried to take it off while walking, but it was pretty stuck by to a little rope that my mom is used to putting on the scissors she uses for her sewing. I remembered that the umbrella was close to the basket where she keeps her sewing materials, so that the most likely if that it it most likely got stuck there. I got at to the market, and the guard just saw my weird and original umbrella decoration, and I just played dumb pretending it really was a decoration. When I came out of the supermarket, I took it off of the umbrella. It was kind of complicated actually. I still wonder how that thing got stuck there, unbelievable! And I wonder how funny I looked with that thing hanging there.Hahaha. Your English is really good, and your story is funny! I just made a few corrections to make it sound more natural. Cheers :)
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Ya, sometimes we get stuck in such situation and we don't have any idea what to do at that time. Guess how it would be if you wear two different slippers and go out for a walk!! Yup, it happened with me and I couldn't do anything but to throw a smile to all those people who gave me a strange gaze.
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