Running today
Today I joined a running event holding by the Run Wild, which gives me a lot of fun. I was eagerly looking for a sports society or club all the time after I came here, however after some days I felt I must choose an indoor activity as my daily routine. The weather in the UK always changes rapidly. Nobody know what is the weather like in the next second. I have given up for watching weather forecast or something like that, because many times the raining stop as soon as I open my umbrella. Oh, I’m beside the point and I should back to the topic: running. By the way, the weather is really nice today although it’s a little bit of cold. I joined the group which is the second slowest one because it’s the first time I run in a such long distance (the whole students were split several groups based on the speeds). In the running process, we ran beside some bars and a few drunk people cheered for us and encouraged us run more quickly. What an amazing thing! It was about 7pm. that people had been drunk in.
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Running today
Today I joined a running event held by Run Wild, which was a lot of fun. I was eagerly looking for a sports society or club since I came here; however after some days I felt I must choose an indoor activity as my daily routine. The weather in the UK always changes rapidly. Nobody knows what is the weather like will be a second later. I have given up watching the weather forecast or anything like that, because many times the raining stops as soon as I open my umbrella. Oh, I’m off topic and I should get back to the topic: running. By the way, the weather is really nice today although it’s a little bit cold. I joined the group rated the second slowest because it’s the first time I have run such a long distance (the whole groups of students were split into several groups based on speed). In the running process, we ran beside some bars and a few drunk people cheered for us and encouraged us to run more quickly. What an amazing thing! People were drunk at 7pm!It was about 7pm. that people had been drunk in. (I'm not sure what you meant here so I guessed.
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