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Who is this man? Hugh Laurie
1. This man is a popular English actor, musician, comedian and writer.
2. He was born in Oxford into a Scottish familie family.
3. He has a bachelor's degree in anthropology and archaeology.
4. He sings, and plays piano, guitar, drums, harmonical and saxophone.
5. He is vocalist and keyboard player for the a charity rock group which includes the actors from of the different TV series.
6. He prefers (4) likes mostly motorcycles.
7. He has a great filmography, but I like the him as a doctor-misanthrope and his American accent.
(1) It is very important that you order your sentences properly in English. Subject "I" + verb "wrote" + object "a lot of facts" + place "here". Here is a guide to the basics: http://www.grammar-test.englet.com/word-order
(2) You must use the indefinite article "a" here as we (the readers) don't know which popular man you are referring to.
(3) Adjectives denoting a nationality or country are always capitalised.
(4) "to prefer" refers to the liking of one thing over another (instead of another thing). If you want to use "to prefer" in this sentence, you must state what he prefers motorcycles to. E.g. "He prefers motorcycles to cars".
Who is this man?
Hi! I wrote a lot of facts here about a popular man. I prepared it for English class. Please correct me. If you know who it is, write it here. Thank you!1. This man is a popular English actor, musician, comedian, and writer.
2. He was born in Oxford into a Scottish family.
3. He has a bachelor's degree in anthropology and archaeology.
4. He sings, plays the piano, guitar, drums, harmonica, and saxophone.
5. He is a vocalist and a keyboard player for a charity rock group, which includes the actors of different TV series.
6. He prefers mostly motorcycles.
7. He has a great filmography, but I prefer the doctor-misanthrope and his American accent.
doctor-misanthrope? I don't know what you're trying to say here.
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