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Two embarrassing moments Have you ever had an embarrassing moment? I am going to talk about my two embarrassing moments My story begins one summer day I have a friend who lives in Iquique She told me come to Iquique for a few days, She said, "It will be fun" mmm I told myself it is a good idea I took my backpack and I went on a trip to Iquique I was excited to see my friend Because since she moved to another town We do not see each other so often anymore I was happy after a long time I was going to meet my friend The next day after my arrival, we plan to going to the beach We went the Cavancha beach Everything seemed perfect…. A sunny day There we were happy ….lying on the sand enjoying the life On the beach, there was a crowd, swimming, sunbathing etc I went swimming on the beach and my friend stay on the sand I was slowly getting into the sea when suddenly a wave knocked me over and gave me several laps When I stood up, I was a bit dizzy And I did not realize that the top of my bikini had moved I quickly put the bikini in your place and ran out of the sea When I told my friend, she could not stop laughing She tells me do not worry We decided to go to eat an ice cream but before we are going to eat ice cream, my friend went to the public bathroom I stayed waiting outside the bathroom I was under a palm tree waiting for my friend When suddenly I feel that something falls from the sky Something hit my head I looked up and I said Oh no A seagull had defecated Can you imagine how I felt? I went into the bathroom to remove the poop in my hair.. That day I learned that I should not stand under a palm tree and keep my sense of humor After all, life is fun!!!

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Two embarrassing moments

Have you ever had an embarrassing moment?
I am going to talk about my two embarrassing moments
My story begins one summer day
I have a friend who lives in Iquique
She told me come to Iquique for a few days,
She said, "It will be fun"
"hmmm," I thought to myself, "is this a good idea?"
I took my backpack and went on a trip to (left for / headed out to) Iquique
I was excited to see my friend
Because since she moved to another town 
We do not see each other so often anymore (I don't get to see her very often anymore)
I was happy that I was going to finally see my friend.
The day after my arrival, we planned on going to the beach
We went the Cavancha beach
Everything seemed perfect…. A sunny day
There we were happy ….lying on the sand enjoying the life
On the beach, there was a crowd, swimming, sunbathing etc
I went swimming in the ocean and my friend stayed on the sand
I was slowly getting into the sea (ocean) when suddenly a wave knocked me over and splashed me several times
When I stood up, I was a bit dizzy
And I did not realize that the top of my bikini had moved
I quickly put the bikini back into place and ran out of the sea (ocean)
When I told my friend, she could not stop laughing
She told me not to worry
We decided to go to eat ice cream, but before we left, my friend went to the public bathroom
I stayed outside
I was under a palm tree waiting for my friend
When suddenly, I felt something fall from the sky
Something hit my head I looked up and I said Oh no 
A seagull had pooped on me
Can you imagine how I felt?
I went into the bathroom to remove (wash) the poop in (from) my hair..
That day, I learned that I should not stand under a palm tree, and to
keep my sense of humor (without the comma and word "to" it sounds like you should not keep your sense of humor)
After all, life is fun!!!

Great story, hahaha. Funny too. Your English is very good. Just some small changes to make it sound more natural :)
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Thanks Paul for reading my story. Regards ))))
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Those are two great stories.they were very funny.they made me laugh.
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Please, I'm waiting for your feedback Thank you!!!

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