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Eiken Writing Test Please check these sentences.

Example Question from

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【QUESTION】

Most elementary schools in Japan serve lunch to their students. Some people say that this service should be stopped. What do you think about that?

【Answer】

I think that it should not be stopped.

First of all, if it is stopped, parents will have to make a lunch box for their child. It is hard work for parents to make a lunch box. Parents need to get up early, because children must get on to the school by eight thirty.

Also, the served lunch tastes good. For instance, when I was student, I always took more one.

Due to the reasons above, I do not think that that service should be stopped.

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Eiken Writing Test

Please check these sentences.

Example Question from

http://eslclub.jp/blog/eiken-2-writing-questions/

【QUESTION】

Most elementary schools in Japan serve lunch to their students. Some people say that this service should be stopped. What do you think about that?

【Answer】

I think that it should not be stopped.

First of all, if it is stopped, parents will have to make a lunch box for their child. It is hard work for parents to make a lunch box. Parents need to get up early, because children must get to the school by eight thirty.

Also, the served lunch tastes good. For instance, when I was student, I always took more than one.

Due to the reasons above, I do not think that that service should be stopped.


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