Long trip next summer
Me, my wife, our little baby and my friend are going to visit Lithuania, Latvia, Estonia, Sweden, Norway and Finland by car next summer. The beginning of the trip is approximately the end of May or the beginning of June with a duration of 20-25 days. The approximate plan of our route is as follows. We will leave Ufa and get through Moscow to Vilnius.Then we will go to Tallinn through Riga. After that we will leave Tallinn by ferry and will go to Stockholm. From Bergen, we will travel to Finland through the territory of Sweden along the shores of the Baltic Sea. We are going to get to Helsinki, then we'll go to St. Petersburg after we go to Ufa. We are looking for travelers who want to join us and to have a good time))
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Long trip next summer
Me, my wife, our little baby and my friend My wife, our little baby, my friend, and I are going to visit Lithuania, Latvia, Estonia, Sweden, Norway and Finland by car next summer. The beginning of the trip is approximately the trip will begin around the end of May or the beginning of June with a duration of 20-25 days. The approximate general plan of our route is as follows: We will leave Ufa, get go through Moscow, and on to Vilnius. Then we will go to Tallinn through Riga. After that we will leave Tallinn by ferry and will go to Stockholm. From Bergen, we will travel to Finland through the territory of Sweden along the shores of the Baltic Sea and on to Finland. We are going to get go to Helsinki, and then we'll go to St. Petersburg after we go to Ufa. We are looking for travelers who want to join us and to have a good time))Great job! Sounds like a lot of fun :)
* "... with a duration of 20-25 days" sounds very formal. I think it would be more natural to say "... and will last 20 or 25 days."
* There is something slightly unnatural about "We will get to X through Y." It sounds kind of weird to say "We will travel to Finland through the territory of Sweden." I think it makes more sense to say, "We will travel through Sweden and on to Finland" or "We will travel through Sweden to get to Finland." In other words, say the places in chronological order. First you'll be in Sweden, then you'll be in Finland, so put Sweden first. "Through Sweden to get to Finland."
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