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Fast food
Is fast food always a bad thing? I don't think so!First, even though it doesn't provide the nutrients and vitamins that we need to be healthy and to have strong bones, it can't be all bad for your body if you control yourself and don't eat it too often. People who always eat fast food it, often suffer from obesity as well as a sedentary lifestyle. and sedentarism too. That Such people don't care about the damage it can cause to their bodies if they don't have/(carry?) maintain a healthy lifestyle, and or they may not be aware that they could die if they don't take care of themselves.
Secondly, everything is so expensive nowadays! Fast food is expensive, but however buying fruits, vegetables, meat etc, is even more expensive. Vegetarians, like me, spend so much more money that I really understand why people prefer to eat fast food. I am not saying that it is good, though, but what should people do when they don't have enough money to buy all the things they need to have a healthy life.
Finally, fast food is always the first thing that crosses your mind when you are in a hurry or you don't feel like cooking. It also can be an alternative for when you are out or hanging out with friends and you cannot prepare your own food. It is a good option because it is fast and easy to order. The only disadvantage may be that sometimes you have to wait a lot while to receive it.
In conclusion, I don't think fast food is bad. You just have to be aware of the damage it can cause to your body because it is not good for your health. Despite that fact, it is easy and a good option for any moment convenient.
Overall you did a very good job. Some of my changes were a little picky. There were a some places where the grammar was not quite right but some were just changing the wording to something that flows or sounds better. For example "sedentarism" may be an actual word in the dictionary but I have never heard it used. Other changes were not because they were technically wrong but just because it seemed to work better for example "while" for "lot", as I think about it now they could both be correct depending on what you mean. "To wait a lot" would imply that on many occasions it is necessary to wait and " to wait a while" implies that on a particular occasion one has to wait although this occasion may happen repeatedly as in " Every time I order deep dish pizza I have to wait a while for it to come." One would use wait a lot as in " When you go to the doctor you have to wait a lot, you wait at the front desk, in the waiting room, in the exam room and when you pay the bill at the end." Hope this helps.
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