Pen Pal

Today I got a Chinese pen Pal and I want to start things off right. If you guys can, could you please correct this.

Thanks...
你好！我是你的 Pen Pal。我是美国人。我十七岁。我是ＡＢＣ，American Born Chinese.还有我一中国人一边日本人（我们一般用混血儿来描述。你可以说，我一半是中国人，一半是日本人）。因为我的爸爸的主父（应该是祖父）是中国人。还有我的妈妈得主（祖）父母是日本人。

我有一个姐姐和一个哥哥。我的哥哥二十三岁。我的姐姐二十二岁。

我的碗运动是感到那跳舞（这个。。。没看懂。你是不是想说，我喜欢的运动是跳舞）。在周末，我喜欢跑步。

在周末，你喜欢做什么？你喜欢学英文吗？为什么？ （这句没错，不过我喜欢旅游）

我希望你可以看我的中文。还有你可以写中文和英文（你是不是想说写完英文后在下面附上中文？）所以我可以练习看中文。（我们不说看。我们说读，不过看也行吧）

Hello! I'm your Pen Pal.I am an American. I am seventeen. I'm a mix between Chinese and Japanse. I'm also an ABC, or an American Born Chinese. Because, my father's grandparent were Chinese and my mom's grandparents were Japanese.

I have one older sister and one older brother. My brother is twentry three and my sister is twenty two.

At School, I am on the schools Pole Vaulting Team and on the weekends I like to run.
On the weekends what do you like doiung? Do you like learning English? Why?

I hope you can read my Chinese and If you can could you please write in Chinese and English so I can practice reading Chinese.

Pen Pal

Today I got a Chinese pen Pal and I want to start things off right. If you guys can, could you please correct this.

Thanks...
你好！我是你的 Pen Pal。我是美国人。我十七岁。我是ＡＢＣ，American Born Chinese.我是中国和日本的混血儿(mix)，还有我一边中国人一边日本人。因为我的爸爸的主父 曾祖父是中国人。还有我的妈妈得主父母 曾外祖母是日本人。
 
我还有一个姐姐和一个哥哥。我的哥哥二十三岁。我的姐姐二十二岁。

我的碗运动是感到那跳舞在学校，我参加撑杆跳高队。在周末，我喜欢跑步。

在周末，你喜欢做什么？你喜欢学英文吗？为什么？

我希望你可以看我的中文。还有你可以写中文和英文所以我可以练习看中文。

Hello! I'm your Pen Pal.I am an American. I am seventeen. I'm a mix between Chinese and Japanse. I'm also an ABC, or an American Born Chinese. Because, my father's grandparent were Chinese and my mom's grandparents were Japanese.

I have one older sister and one older brother. My brother is twentry three and my sister is twenty two.

At School, I am on the schools Pole Vaulting Team and on the weekends I like to run.
On the weekends what do you like doiung? Do you like learning English? Why?

I hope you can read my Chinese and If you can could you please write in Chinese and English so I can practice reading Chinese.

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Hope it is useful for you. 希望可以这对你有用。