Life is better today tham it was 100 years ago. Do you agree? (essay)
The world has changed dramatically in the last century. The invention of computers and the Internet made our lives completely different.
First of all, it is worth to mention that modern medicine is much better than it was a hundred years ago. Penicillin which was discovered at the beginning of the 20th century saved thousands of people. Nowadays nutrition is significantly better and it helps us to live healthier and avoid a lot of dangerous diseases.
Last century introduced us to absolutely new entertainment. It is computer games. Now they are even considered as a cybersport with its own competitions and rules. The concept of entertainment completely changes.
The other big positive change is a way of communication. With the creation of social networks and instant messengers, we can effortlessly keep in touch with people in any place of the world.
In my opinion, changes are not always for the better but I can say that I would prefer to live in my time and not a hundred years ago.
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The world has changed dramatically in the last century. The invention of computers and the Internet has made our lives completely different.
First of all, it is worth mentioning that modern medicine is much better than it was a hundred years ago. Penicillin, which was discovered at the beginning of the 20th century has saved thousands of people. Nowadays, nutrition is significantly better and it helps us to live healthier and avoid a lot of dangerous diseases.
The last century introduced us to a completely new type of entertainment. It is computer games. Now they are even considered as a cybersport, with their own competitions and rules. The concept of entertainment has completely changed.
The other big positive change is a way of communication. With the creation of social networks and instant messenging, we can effortlessly keep in touch with people in any place of the world.
In my opinion, changes are not always for the better but I can say that I would prefer to live in my time and not a hundred years ago.
Great writing! Just check over different forms of the past tense and their uses maybe (:
First of all, it is worth mentioning that modern medicine is much better than it was a hundred years ago. Penicillin, which was discovered at the beginning of the 20th century has saved thousands of people. Nowadays, nutrition is significantly better and it helps us to live healthier and avoid a lot of dangerous diseases.
The last century introduced us to a completely new type of entertainment. It is computer games. Now they are even considered as a cybersport, with their own competitions and rules. The concept of entertainment has completely changed.
The other big positive change is a way of communication. With the creation of social networks and instant messenging, we can effortlessly keep in touch with people in any place of the world.
In my opinion, changes are not always for the better but I can say that I would prefer to live in my time and not a hundred years ago.
Great writing! Just check over different forms of the past tense and their uses maybe (:
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