TOEFL writing I'm practice English for the toefl exam. This is a writing section. If you correct my sentence that would be nice. TOPIC : In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural condition or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. My answer : Some people think that my country Japan needs for land to be developed for housing and industry in order to be better business conditions. other people think that my country needs for land to be left in its natural condition in order to keep beautiful nature, protect the earth from global warming. if asked, both side will provide logical reasons to support their stance. I would say there more need for land to be left in its natural condition. Let me show you what I mean. First of all, the earth temperature is getting warmer cause of people. People cut threes, built many buildings, make rode for car that's why temperature is increase. for example this summer in Japan, some places it's reached 40 degrees. Even some people were died, mechanic machines were broken because it was too hot. Secondly, animals come to cities and farms for look for food. they used to don't come down to those places, but recently there isn't much place to live and look for food for animals because people cut threes　off. That isn't good for animals and not only animals it isn't good for human either. For instance, my mom's friend family has a farm, there were many vegetables, but one day animals come down and they picked some vegetables up. In conclusion, for the above reasons. I think there more need for land to be left in its natural condition.