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Negative aspects of living in Cádiz When you visit Cádiz for the first time, you might think that it is a small paradise perfect for erderly people. You can spend a lot of time on the beach, sunbathing and seeing the dawn before the night comes. Unluckily, young people won't feel the same for the following reasons: - Firstly, the city is so small, so, unless you have a car, you will be all the time in the same places. - Secondly, there is no so many opportunities to find a stable job, and the prices to rent an apartment are quite high, thus, I really recommend you to save up some money before moving to Cádiz. - Thirdly, night life is horrible. There is just one decent discotheque in the city and It's quite expensive. You can go to have a party for free too, unfortunately, this places are normally empty. Apart from those reasons, the city is well reckoned for the quality of the gastronomy and it natural ecosystem. So take all of this ideas into account and decide if you want to come here or no.

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Negative aspects of living in Cádiz

When you visit Cádiz for the first time, you might think that it is a small paradise perfect for elderly people. You can spend a lot of time on the beach, sunbathing and watching the sunset **dawn is when the sun goes up, so it wouldn't be (right) before night** seeing the dawn before the night comes. Unluckily, young people won't feel the same for the following reasons:

- Firstly, the city is so small,. So, unless you have a car, you will be all the time in  at the same places all the time.

- Secondly, there is no so many opportunities to find a stable job, and the prices to rent an apartment are quite high, thus, I really recommend you to save up some money before moving to Cádiz.

- Thirdly, the night life is horrible. There is just one decent discotheque in the city and It's quite expensive. You can go to have a party for free too, unfortunately, this places are normally empty.

Apart from those reasons, the city is well reckoned  known for the quality of the gastronomy and its natural ecosystem. So take all of this ideas into account and decide if you want to come here or not.

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Good writing overall. The only major problem is your third point. I am not sure what is meant by <You can go to have a party for free too, unfortunately, this places are normally empty>. Is "have a party" the name of a place? Or do you mean that you can have a party for free? If so, where and how could it be empty since it is a bit vague where you would be having a party.

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