My best friend
Maitha is my favorite friend. We complete together 8 years , it’s a nice years i enjoy with my friend. Before 5 years maitha make for me a Surprises in the bus , she bring for me a nice bag and chocolate from Germany. When i came i ask maitha this bag for how she said takes this bag to you i bringet to you from Germany. Maitha knows i like Germany things because when i travel to Germany i bring a lot of chocolate from there. My life was happy when i know her , Because i have a good friendship with her .
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My best friend
Maitha is my favorite best friend. (Favorite is correct, but it is not normally used to describe a friend) We complete together 8 years We have known each other 8 years (or "we have been friends for 8 years"), it’s a nice years i enjoy with my friend I have enjoyed these years with my friend (It sounds odd to say this. This might be better expressed as "I've enjoyed all the time we've spent together"). Before 5 years maitha make for me a Surprises in the bus After 5 years, Maitha gave me a surprise on the bus (I'm not sure what you mean here. I think you mean that after knowing Maitha 5 years she surprised you be giving you a give while on the bus), she bring for brought me a nice bag and chocolate from Germany. When i came i ask maitha this bag for how she said takes this bag to you i bringet to you from Germany. (I don't understand what you mean here.) Maitha knows i like Germany German things because when i travel to Germany i bring a lot of chocolate from there. My life was happy when i know her (The use of past tense "was" implies you are no longer friends. "when I know her" doesn't make sense because once you know someone, you always know her) I am happy when I'm with her, because i have a good friendship with her .0
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That is so sweet of her!
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