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Hello! I'm Patricia! Hello guys! I'm Patricia. I live in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil. I live near Copacabana beach so I can walk about 5 minutes to arrive. I don't like so much sun in my skyn because ia very hot here! :) But I like the ocean. I'm motion designer in a design agency and I like a lot my work and my friends who I knew there. For now, that's all. Thank you so much to help to improve my english. :)

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Hello! I'm Patricia!

Hello guys! I'm Patricia. I live in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil. I live near Copacabana beach so I can walk there in about 5 minutes. I don't like too much sun on my skin because it is very hot here! :) But I like the ocean.

I'm a motion designer in a design agency and I like my work a lot (order of words - how you feel about something (adjective) would generally be said before the thing that you do, for example, the noun in English) and my friends who I know there. For now, that's all. Thank you so much for helping me to improve my English. :)


Hi Patricia,

Just a few corrections. A few spelling corrections, but the most common thing was the order of your words in some places.

In English, we tend to say the adjective before the noun, so we might say I have a pair of black shoes, whereas I believe that in Portuguese you would say I have a pair of shoes, black or eu tenho um par de sapatos pretos.

Just a little tip and good luck with your language learning.

Robert

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Hello guys! I'm Patricia. I live in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil. I live near Copacabana beach so I only have to walk about 5 minutes from home until I arrive there.

I don't like too much sun on my skin because it is very hot here! :) But I like the ocean.

I'm a motion designer in a design agency, I like my work a lot and my friends who I have met here.

For now, that's all I have to say. Thank you so much for reading, please help me to improve my English. :)

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Hi Patricia, my name is Andres and I am here to practice Portuguese :) I have family in Rio and was there on 2017 near Ipanema, great experience! Good luck and hope that you can improve your English

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