Befalls'Unity
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Clouds beginning to get dark
And darker as new day arrrives.
The usual normal raindrops
Has now turned to blackdrops.
It overflows the city,
The people consumed it
And the bitterness taste,
Poisoned the people sick.
Trees too has fade away.
It leaves a horrible mark;
Of pale, fragile and sick.
I saw no not a single leaf
Of which the trees hesitate
To face the passers-by,
For he bears the nakedness.
Then, I heard the dreadful cry
Of the innocent sheep
Which to my surprise, all has
Turned to an arrogant black sheep.
I was wonderin' and pondering
Over the horrifying scenes;
Then, late night, I realized,
The unity in society has lost.
But then, I saw a little
Bright corner in each hearts,
Eagerly waitin' to brighten them up.
Then, it taught me -
Being togetherness
Can heal the befallen unity.
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