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French challenges in supporting social entrepreneurship In France, the economic situation is pretty bad regarding the rates of unemployment, especially that of the young people. The government implement a lot of policies and trainings to support young people to access job writing good curriculum vitae and succeeding in job applications and interviews. Nevertheless, the on-the-ground-reality is that there is a real lack of jobs, at least there are not enough jobs for each young people and master degree students who want to work as an employee. In the same time, young people birth and grow up in a global ecologic and economic world crisis with involve a very large range of social issues and unfortunately, until now, the politics couldn’t solve all the social inequalities and environmental disorders. As a cooperative, our first challenge in supporting social entrepreneurship is to get the opportunity to address social issues to young people. We work hard to aware them about the opportunity to face the social issues creating their own project and job. We aware them that with a good knowledge of their territory, a good observation and analysis of it (strength, weakness, opportunities and threats) they could be able to create innovative projects with social impacts that make sense, by their own, being supported by the cooperative and all our entrepreneurs.

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Really nice text Noémie! 

French challenges in supporting social entrepreneurship

In France, the economic situation is pretty bad regarding the rates of unemployment, especially that of the young people. The government has implemented a lot of policies and training s programs to support young people by developing their job application skills, including to access job writing good curriculum vitae and succeeding in job applications and interviews. Nevertheless, the on-the-ground-reality is that there is a real lack of jobs, at least there are not enough jobs for each every young people person and master degree students who want to work as an employee.
At the same During this time, young people birth were born and grew up in a global ecologic and economic world crisis with which involves a very large range of social issues, and unfortunately, until now, the politics couldn’t hasn't been able to solve all the social inequalities and environmental disorders/problems/challenges?. As a cooperative, our first challenge in supporting social entrepreneurship is to get the opportunity to address the social issues to facing young people. We work hard to make them aware them about of the opportunity to face deal with the social issues by creating their own project and job. We make them aware them that with a good knowledge of their territory/field/area/specialty and good observation and analysis of it (strength, weakness, opportunities and threats) they could be able to create innovative projects with social impacts that make sense, by on their own, while  being supported by the cooperative and all our entrepreneurs.
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French challenges in supporting social entrepreneurship

In France the economic situation is pretty bad regarding the rate of unemployment, especially that of young people. The government implements many policies and trainings to support young people to access jobs, to write good curriculum vitae and to succeed in job applications and interviews. Nevertheless, the on-the-ground-reality is that there is a real lack of jobs, at least there are not enough jobs for each young person or master degree student who wants to work as an employee.
At the same time, young people are born into and grow up in a global ecological and economic world crisis which involves a very large range of social issues and unfortunately, until now, politics has been unable to solve all the social inequalities and environmental disorders. As a cooperative, our first challenge in supporting social entrepreneurship is to get the chance to address social issues to young people. We work hard to make them aware of the opportunity to face the social issues creating their own project and job*. We let them know that with a good knowledge of their territory, a good observation and analysis of it (strength, weakness, opportunities and threats) they will be able to create innovative projects with social impacts that make sense, by their own initiative and being supported by the cooperative and all our entrepreneurs.

*I do not understand this sentence.

very well written!

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