Urgent!!!!!Letter of recommendation
Letter of recommendation for myself, please help me!!!! thanks!!!
Here is a letter of recommendation that my teacher wrote to me recently, and of course, I translated it into English like this.
But I want to improve this letter by making some sentences more professional and maybe use more adjective and word group, please help me!! you have my thanks!!!
It is my pleasure to recommend H Peng for admission to your University. I met H in a sketching class during his second year of college, after he changed his major from chemistry to industrial design. Therefore, as his teacher, I have witnessed immense progress from an absolute beginner to a creative and hardworking design student.
An assignment of the first product sketching course was to finish 100 paper of sketches in 4 weeks. All other students expect H had already taken my fundamental drawing course before, so in that case, it is more difficult for him to finish this task. But throughout the course, I found that his sketching skill improved rapidly, even surpassing many other students. He asked me and classmates for advice very frequently, but also continued drawing during the class break and even after the class, showing determination and ambition.
During the next semester, we focused on enhancing students’ marker sketching and give them the same assignment as the one before. H showed very good marker skill in the beginning, meaning that he had conducted a large amount of practice in his spare time before. It also shows that he is willing to devote himself to learning professional skills, and I can’t deny his talent by reviewing his assignment.
As far as I know, other teachers also speak highly complimented on his attitude of study and design ability, and I truly believe that he can go much further with his passion and insightful mind for design. It is my strong opinion that H would be the best candidate for you, and she has my highest recommendation. Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions regarding her character or past academic work.
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It would be my pleasure to recommend H Peng for admission to your University. I first met H in a sketching class during his second year of college, after he changed his major from chemistry to industrial design. Therefore, as his teacher, I have witnessed immense progress from an absolute beginner to a creative and hardworking design student.
One particular assignment of the first product sketching course was to finish 100 papers of sketches in 4 weeks. All the other students except H had already taken my fundamental drawing course before, so in that case, it was more difficult for him to finish this task. However, throughout the course, I found that his sketching skill improved rapidly, even surpassing many other students. He often asked for advice from both myself and his classmates, but also continued drawing throughout the class break and even after the class, showing determination and ambition.
During the next semester, we focused on enhancing students’ marker sketching skills by giving them the same assignment as the one before. H showed very good marker skills in the beginning, suggesting that he had undertaken a large amount of practice in his spare time. This shows that he is willing to devote himself to independently learning professional skills, and I can’t deny his talent by reviewing his assignment.
As far as I know, other teachers also speak highly of his attitude towards study and his design ability, and I truly believe that he can go much further with his passion and insightful mind for design. It is my strong opinion that H would be the best candidate for you, and
(It was very well written! Just changed the structure of some words to make it flow a bit more smoothly. :) Good luck! )
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