Do these sentences sound natural??
1. I accidentally dropped off my phone out of my pocket, and the screen of my phone has cracks on it.
2. She went off on him because she found out he cheated on her.
3. If something doesn't go the way she wants, she would try to convince people to follow her leads.
4. There are quite a few people talking about racism all the time around me. It just starts to get on my nerves.
5. I remember I charged my phone this morning when I left my home, I have no idea why the phone batter is so low right now.
Do they sound natural? If not, please help me make them sound more natural. Thank you ！
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I made small changes to #1, #3, and #5
1. I accidentally dropped my phone out of my pocket, and the screen of my phone has cracks on it.2. She went off on him because she found out he cheated on her.
3. If something doesn't go the way she wants, she would try to convince people to follow her lead.
4. There are quite a few people talking about racism all the time around me. It just starts to get on my nerves.
5. I remember I charged my phone this morning when I left my home, I have no idea why the phone battery is so low right now.
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Do these sentences sound natural??
1. I accidentally dropped off my phone out of my pocket, and the screen of my phone has cracks on it.2. She went off on him because she found out he cheated on her.
3. If something doesn't go the way she wants, she would try to convince people to follow her leads.
4. There are quite a few people talking about racism all the time around me. It just starts to get on my nerves.
5. I remember I charged my phone this morning when I left my home, I have no idea why the phone batter is so low right now.
Do they sound natural? If not, please help me make them sound more natural. Thank you ！
1. The screen of my phone has developed cracks because my phone dropped out from my pocket.
2. She left him because he cheated on her.
3. She would force everyone to follow her even if they disagreed with her.
4. Everyone is talking about racism but so little is being done about it.
5. Why is my battery so low when I had charged my phone this morning?
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1. My phone fell out of my pocket and the screen cracked.
2. She went off on one when she found out he cheated on her.
3. If something doesn't go her way she tries to convince people to do it her way.
4. There are loads of people around me talking about racism. It's getting on my nerves.
5. My phone was fully charged this morning. I have no idea why the battery is so low now.
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