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It must be sent profile for Art Company. Could you correct my English sentence? Born in 1981 in Japan. Live and work in Japan. Her performance draws pictures with sand. Create a single story with lots of sand picture. Ｈe's got delicate touch for painting. Her pictures are appeared and disappeared. We can feel impermanent beauty in simplicity and very strong life force. 2017　Sand Art Workshop for children, Toy Museum, Austria 2018 Opening short sand movie , NHK news program, Japan

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Hi Yuko,

I tried to capture the spirit of what you wrote rather than just a literal correction. Hope you like it.

Martin


Sand Story Performance Artist Yuko X

Yuko X was born in 1981 in Japan, where she still lives and works.

She is noted for her Sand Story performances.

Picture by picture, she creates a story in the sand, using a delicate line-drawing technique that has led critics to liken her art to paintings. 

Yoko chose sand as her medium because the short lifespan of her art before it disappears reflects the impermanent beauty and transience of life contained in the Japanese expression 'Mono no aware'.

References:

2017　Sand Art Workshop for children, Toy Museum, Austria
2018 Opening short sand movie , NHK news program, Japan


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It must be sent profile for Art Company. Could you correct my English sentence?

Born in 1981 in Japan.
Lives and works in Japan.

Her performance draws pictures with sand.
She creates a single story with lots of sand pictures.
She has a delicate touch for painting.
Her pictures have appeared and disappeared.
We feel an impermanent beauty in the simplicity and very strong life force in her work.

2017　Sand Art Workshop for children, Toy Museum, Austria
2018 Opening short sand movie , NHK news program, Japan

very well written!

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