My hobby
My hobbies are jogging and scuba diving. On my day off, I usually run around my house. During my summer vacation, I go to tropical island with my wife for scuba diving. I have been to Hawaii, Maldive, Tahiti, Palau or something like that. And I’m not sure if I can call it a hobby, I’m so into watching American TV drama. I watched Twenty four, Prison break and Lost. I’m into watching Grey’s Anatomy. Grey’s anatomy is one of hospital drama. But the drama is love story which is also known as Love’s anatomy.
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My hobby
My hobbies are jogging and scuba diving. On my day off, I usually run around my house. During my summer vacation, I go to a tropical island with my wife for scuba diving. I have been to Hawaii, The Maldives, Tahiti, Palau and similar places. I’m not sure if I can call it a hobby, but I’m so into watching American TV dramas. I watched Twenty four, Prison break and Lost. I’m into watching Grey’s Anatomy. Grey’s anatomy is a hospital drama. But the drama is also a love story which is also known as Love’s anatomy.**if this was your meaning?
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Thank you for your message. I know what you mean.
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Well done! You are using a lot of idioms and it makes your language seem very natural. (For example, "I'm into..." instead of "I like.")
I am just a little confused by the sentence, "On my day off, I run around my house." There is nothing wrong with the grammar or spelling, but the meaning is not totally clear to me. Do you run on a treadmill in your house? Do you like to go running around your neighborhood? Or does it mean you run errands? I don't use this construct where I come from, but perhaps it is said elsewhere.
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