Rysy - I'd need style corrections which sounds more natural and professional English.
"Rysy – the highest peak in the High-Tatras which is approachable on a hiking trail. The weather was clear, the company was perfect, the journey was exhausting, the water of lake was extremely cold, (but not enough to not go in) and the views were breathtaking. I had a really good time at High-Tatras. "
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"Rysy is the highest peak in the High-Tatras (mountains) It can be approached (from a number different) hiking trails (ranging from 23 to 15 km.). On my journey, the weather was clear; the company was perfect, but the journey was exhausting! The water in the lake, (Morskie Oko), was extremely cold, but not cold enough to prevent us from swimming. The views during our hike were breathtaking. I had a really good time at High-Tatras. "
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Rysy - I'd need style corrections which sounds more natural and professional English.
"Rysy – the highest peak in the High-Tatras that is accessible from which is approachable on a hiking trail. The weather was clear, the company was perfect, but the journey was exhausting. The water in the mountain of lake was extremely cold, (but not cold enough to not go in keep us out) and the views were breathtaking. I had a really good time at High-Tatras. "Instead of really good time, maybe a stronger adjective like "an amazing time" or "a memorable day" or something.
Your english was good and correct. I only corrected for style. I added "mountain" before lake because otherwise the two parts may not seem connected. Not often are there lakes on high mountains so it might have been a little confusing to some people.
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