Too Soon To Say Goodbye
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Thank you so much in advance!
Knew it for a month
And a four days.
The start was fun.
It went well in between ;
Lots of fun, care and
A little bit of affectionate feelings.
Since the start, she wasn't
Sure of how it will end.
Then, blindly it goes amazingly awesome,
Also, out of expectations
The door closes so suddened.
It hurt her a little bit.
Both had created a lot of memories
Within the very short-span of time.
And that was something
Not so easy to just let it go.
She has been holding her heart,
But how shall she open-up the truth
And when?
Just like the complete stranger guest
That stepped in someone's house
For a night, then left in the morning.
And no one knows,
Without keeping in touch
Whether the stranger will show up
Someday for the second time or not.
It might or it may never,
Ever come alive again.
Oh poor her! It just ends like that.
So I say:
It is too soon to bid goodbye!
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Too Soon To Say Goodbye
Please,someone help me correct the writings.Thank you so much in advance!
Knew it for a month
And four days.
The start was fun.
It went well in between ;
Lots of fun, care and
A little bit of affectionate feelings.
Since the start, she wasn't
Sure of how it would end.
Then, blindly, it goes amazingly awesome.
Then, unexpectedly
The door closed so suddenly.
It hurt her a little bit.
Both had created a lot of memories
Within the very short-span of time.
And that was something
Not so easy to just let go.
She has been holding her heart,
But how should she reveal the truth
And when?
Just like an unknown guest
That stayed in someone's house
For a night, and left in the morning.
And no one knows,
Without keeping in touch
Whether the stranger will show up
Someday for the second time or not.
It may or it may never,
Ever come alive again.
Oh poor her! It ends just like that.
So I say:
It is too soon to say goodbye!
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Yes, Umar.
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did you write this by yourself?
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