cover letter Dear Mr X, I am writing to apply for the lawyer position at Silva office. I believe my knowledge and experience make me a strong candidate for your office. I graduated from State of Rio

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Fabiana Papacena

cover letter Dear Mr X, I am writing to apply for the lawyer position at Silva office. I believe my knowledge and experience make me a strong candidate for your office. I graduated from State of Rio de Janeiro University with a degree in civil law. Subsenquently, I finished an MBA in real estate law. Afterward, I was hired in an insurance company and I worked there for seven years. Following that, I started a job in an insurance health company and this is my currently occupation. Details about my education and experience are in the attached resume. Thank you for considering my application. I hope to hear from you soon. Sincerely, FP I would appreciate if someone correct me. thanks

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Dear Mr. X,

I am writing to apply for the lawyer position at Silva office. I believe my knowledge and experience make me a strong candidate for your office. I graduated from State of Rio de Janeiro University with a degree in civil law. Subsenquently, I finished an MBA in real estate law. Afterward, I was hired in an insurance company and I worked there for seven years. Following that, I started a job in an insurance health company and this is my current occupation. Details about my education and experience are in the attached resume. Thank you for considering my application. I hope to hear from you soon.

Sincerely, FP

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Dear Mr. X,

I am writing to apply for a position as a lawyer at the Silva office. I believe my knowledge and experience make me a strong candidate for your office.
I graduated from State of Rio de Janeiro University with a degree in civil law and then completed , Subsenquently, I finished an MBA in real estate law. Afterward, I was hired in by an insurance company and where I worked there for seven years. Following that, I started in my current position at a a job in an insurance health health insurance company and this is my currently occupation.
Details about my education and experience are in the attached resume. Thank you for considering my application. I hope to hear from you soon.

Sincerely,

FP

I would appreciate if someone correct me.

Overall, really really good. Completely understandable and clear. Corrections are mostly style not accuracy.

** you used "Subsequently" correctly (meaning after) but it is more often used to mean "as a result"

example: First I went to school for law, then for an MBA. Subsequently, I was hired by....

---You got the job BECAUSE you had the 2 different education experiences.

thanks

Dear Mr. X,

I am writing to apply for a position as a lawyer at the Silva office. I believe my knowledge and experience make me a strong candidate for the job.

I graduated from State of Rio de Janeiro University with a degree in civil law. Subsenquently, I finished an MBA in real estate law and was hired at an insurance company. and I worked there for seven years before Following that, I starting at my current position a job in at another insurance health company. and this is my currently occupation.
More details about my education and experience are in the attached resume. Thank you for considering my application. I hope to hear from you soon.

Sincerely,

FP

hi, Clare. its only to practice my English. Its not real, but thanks

Hi Fabiana, would you like simple corrections to the english for correctness, or would you prefer style corrections so it sounds more natural and professional English? If you are using this to apply for an actual job, I would edit it differently than if you are simply trying to learn English.

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