Diary 9-10
Yesterday I didn’t writting small eassy and I convinced myself Sunday is a relaxing day. Today is International teacher’s day, I texted best wishes to my three teachers. After I watched Ant-man film on my computer I got the new idea to finish my essay that my mentor arranged. My cousin didn’t want to go to high school anymore, my family convenced him to finish the left 9-month high schoool life and take part in the college entrance examination in next year. I hope I can finish my eassy as soon as possible.
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It sounds like you had a balanced day with both relaxation and responsibility.
I have made some suggestions to make your writing sound more natural.
Diary 9-10
Yesterday, I didn’t want to write a small essay (for school) because I convinced myself that Sunday was a day to relax.Today is International teacher’s day, so I texted best wishes to three of my teachers.
After I watched the Ant-Man film, on my computer, I was motivated to finish the essay that my mentor asked me to complete.
My cousin said he didn’t want to go to finish high school but my family convinced him to complete the 9 months remaining and then take part in college entrance examinations next year.
I hope I can finish my essay as soon as possible!
Keep up the good work!
I hope this helps
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