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Alain city
Alain it's beautiful city , i live in alain , and i like my city , alain in the Abu Dhabi capital for Emirates , exist in alain jabal hafeet mount , and green mubazra , it is beautiful place, exit above the jabal hafeet three hotel with swimming pool , also more than restaurant , and small toys , and under in green mubazra , exist more fun games for kids , and i believe on future the mubazra be the best. In addition to exist a lot malls , example the biggest malls alain mall and buadi mall. And i like budi mall for sanima and shopping , And a Small malls muagai mall and extra mall and alfoah mall, and more. Also in alain city exist a lot restaurant in all place in alain center and alyahar and zaker , and my favorite place the deserts in alain is very beautiful in winter. Also in alalin it not a lot hotels exist , the hotel which I know rtana hotel and hele hotel and hilton hotel and city session hotel , and exist museum of the home alshaik zayed founder of the uae , also exist the uaeu the best university in the uae , and fatima collge for health sciences. And there are many universities ans schools.Here are my corrections to your work below:
Alain is a beautiful city. I live in Alain and I like my city. Alain is the capital of Abu Dhabi in the Emirates.
In Alain is Jabal Hafeet Mount and Green Mubazra. Alain is a beautiful place. Above the Jabal Hafeet are three hotels and swimming pools, also there are restaurants. Below, in Green Mubazra, there are fun games for kids and small toys.
I believe the future of Mubazra to be the best. There are lots of shopping malls. The biggest malls are Alain mall and Buadai Mall. I like Budi mall for Sanima and shopping. There are small malls in Alain, Muagai mall, Extra mall and Alfoah mall as well as many others.
In the city of Alain there are lots of restaurants in the centre as well as Alyahar and Zaker. My favourite place in Alain is the deserts, they are very beautiful in the winter.
In Alain there are not a lot of hotels. The hotels that I know are the Rtana, Hele, Hilton and City Session hotels. There is a museum for the founder of the United Arab Emirates, Alshaik Zayed.
We have the best university in the United Arab Emirates called UAEU, also Fatima College is good for Health Sciences. UAE has many universities and schools.
I couldn't quite understand everything your were writing, but I have corrected it based on what I think you were meaning. If I can help you anymore then do contact me through italki messaging. I would be very happy to help you work further on your English. I am an italki professional teacher.
Kind regards
Pauline Snowdon
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