An email
Dear Sunny,
How are you doing? Well my new school is very interesting and our uniforms are also very good. It is better than the uniform in primary school. In addition, we need to go to different classrooms when we have different subjects. Also, there are some tests on each Tuesday and Friday. The tests on Friday are very easy but I still made one or two mistakes. Besides , We have a lot of activities in Concord, some of which are in the break time. I bet you don’t have as many activities in your middle school.
Furthermore, we have more than twenty kinds of activities in our school. All of them are very interesting and the teachers are very helpful. By the way, we have nine different choices for lunch. We always have some fruit after lunch. How about your school? I really want to know more about your school.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Love
Ariel
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An email
Dear Sunny,How are you doing? Well mMy new school is very interesting and our uniforms are also very good. It is They are better than the uniforms in primary school. In addition, we need to go to different classrooms when we have different subjects. Also, there are some tests on each every Tuesday and Friday. The tests on Friday are very easy but I still made make one or two mistakes. [The first verb in the sentence is present tense so the second one should also be present tense unless you indicate a time change, like, "The tests on Friday are very easy, but last week I still made one or two mistakes."] Besides , We also have a lot of activities in Concord, some of which are in the at break time. I bet you don’t have as many activities in your middle school. ["Besides" would normally imply that this sentence continues on the same topic as the previous one. "Also" would be better here since you are switching topics.]
Furthermore, we have more than twenty kinds of activities in our school. All of them are very interesting and the teachers are very helpful. By the way, we have nine different choices for lunch. We always have some fruit after lunch. How about your school? I really want to know more about your school.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Love
Ariel
Good work on this! :-) All the corrections are minor and even before making the corrections, I could clearly understand what you mean.
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