IELTS Exercise - Capital Punishment
The main goal of any penalty system is to deter people from committing crimes, As this lead to make community safer. While some people believe that capital punishment should not be used, I strongly support it for serious crimes. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of view and support my opinion with examples.
First of all, human life should be respected as no one has the right to take other people life. Secondly, Innocent people could be wrongly convicted and executed. If the court prove their innocence after they executed, It will be impossible to compensate them. Thirdly, the capitalism sentence creates violence culture and encourage revenge among people. Finally, the crime rates are not necessarily decreased. For example, USA has a higher crimes rate than Europe even USA apply the death penalty.
However, People support the executed sentence have solid reasons to prove their argument. It is the best way to deter people from committing crime. because the fear of death stop people doing crimes. For example, Saudi Arabia has the lowest crime rates globally as a result of applying death penalty to anyone who found guilty in a serious crimes such as murderer and terrorist. Furthermore, It is a form of revenge for the victims, their families and their friends. Lastly, It is very important to prevent serious criminals poss threat to society such as the mafia leaders.
In conclusion, although there are some negative impacts for applying the capital punishment. It is important to inform them that their crimes are not tolerated and inform the victims that government are interested in their suffering.
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IELTS Exercise - Capital Punishment
The main goal of any (penalty?) legal system is to deter people from committing crimes, as this leads to making the community safer. While some people believe that capital punishment should not be used, I strongly support it for serious crimes. In this essay, I will discuss both /sides of view/views/sides/ and support my opinion with examples.
There are multiple arguments opposing capital punishment. First of all, human life should be respected as no one has the right to take /other people/another person's/a/ life, even the life of a murderer. Secondly, innocent people could be wrongly convicted and executed. If the court prove their innocence after they executed, it will be impossible to compensate them. Thirdly, the /capitalism sentence??/ creates a violent culture and encourages revenge among people. Finally, the crime rate_ is not necessarily decreased lower. For example, USA the United States has a higher crime_ rate than Europe even though USA the United States applies the death penalty.
There are multiple arguments supporting capital punishment. /However, people who support the executed sentence capital punishment have solid reasons to prove their argument??/. It is the best way to deter people from committing crime_ because the fear of death stops people doing from committing crimes. For example, Saudi Arabia has the lowest crime rates globally as a result of applying the death penalty to anyone who is found guilty in of a serious crime_ such as murderer and or terrorism. Furthermore, it is a form of revenge for the victims, their families and their friends. Lastly, it is very important to prevent serious criminals poss the threat to society posed by criminals such as the mafia leaders.
In conclusion, although there are some negative impacts for to applying the capital punishment, it is important to
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Thank you Ianna
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I strongly support it for serious crimes.
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Hi Hassan, I actually used the correction function but there was a glitch and it would not submit. I was able to put my corrections into a comment, but of course, the formatting was lost. I do hope that you can still see the words I changed. Good essay!
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The main goal of any penalty system is to deter people from committing crimes, as this leads to making communities safer. While some people believe that capital punishment should not be used, I strongly support it for serious crimes. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view (or “both sides” without “view”) and support my opinion with examples.
First of all, human life should be respected as no one has the right to take other person’s life. Secondly, Innocent (small “i” in “innocent”) people could be wrongly convicted and executed. If the court proves their innocence after they are executed, It will be impossible to compensate them. Thirdly, capitalism sentence (We say “a capital sentence” or “capital punishment”-uncountable. “Capitalism” is an economic system) creates a violent culture and encourages revenge among people. Finally, crime rates are not necessarily decreased. For example, the USA has a higher crime rate than Europe even though the USA apllies the death penalty.
However, people supporting execution have solid reasons for their argument. It is the best way to deter people from committing crime, because the fear of death stops people from committing crimes. For example, Saudi Arabia has the lowest crime rate globally as a result of applying the death penalty to anyone who is found guilty of a serious crime such as murder and terrorism. Furthermore, It is a form of revenge for the victims, their families and their friends. Lastly, It is very important to prevent criminals who pose a serious threat to society such as the mafia leaders...(we prevent someone from doing something. So you would need an ending to this sentence.
In conclusion, although there are some negative impacts for applying the capital punishment, it is important to make clear that some crimes are not tolerated and to show the victims that the government is interested in their suffering.
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