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The assault against Jair Bolsonaro Yesterday, September 6, the candidate Jair Bolsonaro was assaulted during a public act in Minas Gerais. He was stabbed by a man who was blended in the crowd and had to be hospitalized. He suffered a few internal injuries and had to go through a surgery, but fortunately the injuries are not life threatning. Jair Bolsonoro is one of the most popular cadidates for the 2018 presidencial election in Brazil and is well known because of his radical ideas. He appears as the head in every pool for the first round of the presidencial elections that will take place next October, disregarding the candidacy of the ex-president Lula, who will probably be prevented from running because of his conviction for corruption. Despite his apparent popularity, the pools also indicate that Bolsonaro would lose in the second round, since his rejection rate is higher than his popularity. The man who stabbed Bolsonaro was a left-wing party member for a while, but currently he is not part of any political party.

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The assault against Jair Bolsonaro

Yesterday, September 6, the Brazilian presidential candidate Jair Bolsonaro was assaulted during a public act (what was he doing?) in Minas Gerais. He was stabbed by a man who was had blended into the crowd and had to be hospitalized. (Better: He was hospitalized after being stabbed by a man who had blended into the crowd). He suffered a few internal injuries and had to go through a have surgery, but fortunately the injuries are not life-threatening.
Jair Bolsonaro is one of the most popular candidates for in Brazil's  the 2018 presidential election in Brazil and is well known because of his radical ideas. He appears as the head in every pool he is leading every poll for the first round of the presidential elections that will take place next October, disregarding with the exception of the candidacy of the ex-president Lula, who will probably be prevented from running because of his conviction for corruption. Despite his apparent popularity, the pools polls also indicate that Bolsonaro would likely lose in the second round, since his rejection rate is higher than his popularity.
The man who stabbed Bolsonaro was a left-wing party member for a while, but currently he is not part of any political party.


Good writing. I'm a former newspaper reporter, so I would phrase a few things differently to make them more concise or precise, but really not bad. 

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