My first day at university (Master's program)
Hello. My name is Kate and this is my first article on iTalki. I want to say that I really like useful interfcae on this website. Let's talk about my first day at university. Firstly, I want to say that I have graduaded my bachelor degree at ITMO University which is located in Saint-Petersburg. I decided to get full education and go to the ITMO university again. The first day in my university was on the 6th of September. I got up at 9 o'clock and I went to the subway. Yesterday I had English and some lessons about operation and reliability of hardware. On English lesson we talked about why did we decide to go to this university, why did we chose this specality and so on. After end of English lesson, I went to the main bulding and got a campus card, which combines credit card and access card. After that I went to another bulding which is located on Vasilevsky Island and I had 5 hours of lesson called "Operation and reliability of hardware". I liked this course because of the teacher and then I went home. That was my first day at university on Master's program.
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My first day at university (Master's program)
Hello. My name is Kate and this is my first article on iTalki. I want to say that I really like the useful interface on this website. Let's talk about my first day at university. Firstly, I want to say that I have graduaded (graduated) from my bachelor's degree program at ITMO University which is located in Saint-Petersburg. I decided to get a full education and go back to the ITMO. university again The first day in my university was on the 6th of September. I got up at 9 o'clock and I went to the subway. Yesterday I had English and some lessons about the operation and reliability of hardware. On (in our) English lesson we talked about why did we decide (we decided)to go to this university, why did we (we )chose this speciality and so on. After the end of the English lesson, I went to the main building and got a campus card, which combines a credit card and access card. After that I went to another building, which is located on Vasilevsky Island, and I had 5 hours of lesson called "Operation and reliability of hardware". I liked this course because of the teacher. and After that I went home. That was my first day at university on Master's program.Hi Kate!
Well done on this notebook entry! When I added something, I marked it in red. When I corrected something, I marked it in yellow. If a word was not needed, I just struck it out.
A little work on how to use articles (a, an, the) would really help your English progress.
Hope this is helpful,
-Mike
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My first day at university (Master's program)
Hello. My name is Kate and this is my first article on iTalki. I want to say that I really like the useful interface on this website. Let's talk about my first day at university. Firstly, I want to say that I have graduated for my bachelor's degree at ITMO University which is located in Saint-Petersburg. I decided to get a full education and go there once again.my first day there was 6th September. I got up at 9 o'clock and went to the subway. Yesterday I had English and some lessons about the operation and reliability of hardware. In the English lesson we talked about why we decided to go to this university, why we chose this speciality and so on. After end of that, I went to the main building and got a campus card, which combines credit and access cards. After that I went to another building located on Vasilevsky Island and had a 5 hour lesson on "Operation and reliability of hardware". I liked this course because of the teacher and then I went home. That was my first day at university on the Master's program.very well written!
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