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Take care of a cat for a week This afternoon, I went to the airport with my friend to see her off. She brought her cat with her and planed to send it back home located in Kinmen. Kinmen is a county of Taiwan including many beautiful islands. However, she forgot to bring the certificate which can prove the cat vaccinated already. What's worse, there's no time for her to get back and bring the certificate. So, fortunately, I can spend more time with her cat, but unfortunately, she can't pet it for about a week. Speaking to this cat, her name is 哺哺 which pronounced like ''boo-boo.'' I think there's no one in English-speaking countries would name his/her pet boo-boo. If you do name your pet boo-boo, I'll be definitely curious about the reason! Actually, 哺哺 has no specific meaning in Chinese. My friend named the cat 哺哺 just because she thought it sounds cute. I love boo-boo so much but I'm kinda allergic to the cat. I just pet her and my eyes are getting itchy and red. I can expect that I'll start sneezing later. Despite of the allergy, I'm glad to have a chance to take care of her!

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Taking Care of a Cat For a Week

This afternoon, I went to the airport with my friend to see her off. She brought her cat with her and planed to send it back home to Kinmen. Kinmen is a county of Taiwan that includes many beautiful islands. However, she forgot to bring the certificate containing the proof of the cat being vaccinated already. What's worse, there was no time for her to go back and bring the certificate. Fortunately, I get to spend some time with her cat, but unfortunately, she won't be able to pet it for about a week.

Speaking about which, the cat's name is 哺哺 which is pronounced like ''boo-boo.'' I think that no one in English-speaking countries would name his/her pet Boo-boo. If you do name your pet Boo-boo, I'll definitely be curious to know the reason! Actually, 哺哺 has no specific meaning in Chinese. My friend named the cat 哺哺 just because she thought it sounded cute.

I love Boo-boo very much but I'm kinda allergic to the cats. I just pet her and my eyes get itchy and red. I start sneezing later. Despite of the allergy, I'm glad to have a chance to take care of her!
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Take care of a cat for a week

This afternoon, I went to the airport with my friend to see her off. She brought her cat with her and planed to send it back home located in Kinmen. Kinmen is a county of Taiwan including many beautiful islands. However, she forgot to bring the certificate which can prove the cat vaccinated already. What's worse, there's no time for her to get back and bring the certificate. So, fortunately, I can spend more time with her cat, but unfortunately, she can't pet it for about a week.
Speaking to this cat, her name is 哺哺 which pronounced like ''boo-boo.'' I think there's no one in English-speaking countries would name his/her pet boo-boo. If you do name your pet boo-boo, I'll be definitely curious about the reason! Actually, 哺哺 has no specific meaning in Chinese. My friend named the cat 哺哺 just because she thought it sounds cute.
I love boo-boo so much but I'm kinda allergic to the cat. I just pet her and my eyes are getting itchy and red. I can expect that I'll start sneezing later. Despite of the allergy, I'm glad to have a chance to take care of her!


Hi Cocoliu, 

I hope everything is going better with your friend´s cat. 

Although the text is clear, I believe you could change some things to make it ´sound´ even more clear and natural.  I highlighted some words and phrases, so you can check them out.

I am a teacher who considers self-correction can be more effective than teacher correction some times. Check your text and let me know if you made any changes.

Bye!



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