IELTS - Advertisements.
There is no doubt that advertising is a key part of modern business. It is a creative industry which employ thousands of people However, Some people believe that advertisers use unethical way to market their products. Personally, I strongly agree with this opinion. In this essay, I will support my opinion with examples and evidence.
There are solid reasons proof that advertisers manipulate people, because they persude us that buying their products would us happier. As well they encourge people to link having particular products with high life status. Therefore, they use famous and success people such as artist and actors to market their products. As a results, they involve creating a consumer culture to increase their selling and make more profit.
Advertising aims their marketing at children. They realize that children are easily influnced, then they put pressure on their parents to buy them products.Furthermore, advertisements market unhealthy food in a way which attracts children. additionally, they try to show smokers and alcohol drunker as heros such as an advertisement for marlboro smokes showed a strong young man ridding horse and carrying a cigerate in his hand, and alcahol adviretisement shewed a drunk as a romantic guy. As a result, The advertising which aim at children should be controled or even banned.
To sum up, although advertisements inform us about our options and we enjoy adverts, False information in advertisement should be censsored.
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IELTS - Advertisements.
There is no doubt that advertising is a key part of modern business. It is a creative industry which employs thousands of people. However, some people believe that advertisers use unethical ways to market their products. Personally, I strongly agree with this opinion. In this essay, I will support my opinion with examples and evidence.There are solid reasons which prove proof that advertisers manipulate people, because they persuade us that buying their products would make us happier. As well as this, they also encourage people to link having particular products with high life social status. Therefore, they use famous and successful people, such as artists and actors, to market their products. As a results, they involve creating a consumer culture to increase their selling sales and make more profit.
Advertising aims their marketing at children. They realize that children are easily influenced, then so they put pressure on their parents to buy them products. For example, advertisements market unhealthy food in a way which attracts children... (expand on this point - how do they attract children?). Additionally, they try to show smokers and alcohol drinkers as heroes, such as an advertisement for Marlboro smokes cigarettes showed a strong young man riding horse and carrying a cigarette in his hand, and and alcohol advert which showed a drunk as a romantic. (guy = too informal). As a result, the advertising which is aimed at children should be controlled or even banned.
To sum up, although advertisements inform us about our options and we enjoy them, false information in adverts should be censored.
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