My day I'm on vocation with my family. It was so hot last four days. Today it was cloudy but warm. The water temperature was comfortable so we swam and jumped over the waves. Suddenly I felt somethin

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Julia

My day I'm on vocation with my family. It was so hot last four days. Today it was cloudy but warm. The water temperature was comfortable so we swam and jumped over the waves. Suddenly I felt something slimy under my feet. It was nasty huge blue jelly-fish. It was the most disgusting sense I've ever felt.

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My day

I'm on vacation with my family. It was so has been hot for the last four days. Today it was cloudy but warm. The water
temperature was comfortable, so we swam and jumped over the waves. Suddenly I felt something slimy under my feet. It was a nasty huge blue jelly-fish. It was the most disgusting sense I've ever felt. feeling ever.

My day

I'm on vacation with my family. It was has been so hot the last four days. Today it was cloudy, but warm. The water temperature was comfortable so we swam and jumped over the waves. Suddenly I felt something slimy under my feet. It was nasty, huge, blue jelly-fish. It was the most disgusting sense I've ever felt.

Julia, your writing is very good. These are a few minor corrections. Good job!! ))

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