My bad room
My bed room is beautiful,when you enter my room we can see 4 bad because my sister sleep with me. the colors of my room is green and purple and pink behind the door have rows of boot and heel between my bad they light ,I have a big Desk of my Makeup ، I have a changing room in my room،I have a crystal lamp،I have a crystal lamp،I have a vase of roses،In short, my room is clean and clean.
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My bed room is beautiful,when you enter my room we can see 4 bad because my sister sleep with me. the colors of my room is green and purple and pink behind the door have rows of boot and heel between my bad they light ,I have a big Desk of my Makeup ، I have a changing room in my room،I have a crystal lamp،I have a crystal lamp،I have a vase of roses،In short, my room is clean and clean.
"When you enter in my room YOU can see four BEDS" -important is that you start your write with "you" and can't change into a "we" watchout to not mistake BAD with BED and four are beds :)
"Thee colors of my room ARE" - plural, important :)
"Green, purple and pink;"
"behind the door have rows of boot and heel between my BED they light" - even if the meaning of this sentence has no much sense...
"I have a big desk for my makeup, I also have a changing room" - don't need to repeat that it's in your room it's what you're talking about
You wrote two times "crystal lamp" but pretty sure you didn't meant. And that your room is "clean abd clean" what you mean?
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My bedroom is beautiful,when you enter my room we can see 4 beds because my sister sleeps with me. the colors of my room are green, purple and pink. behind the door it has rows of boot and heel between my bed and the light, I have a big Desk for my Makeup ، I have a changing room in my room،I have a crystal lamp،I have a crystal lamp،I have a vase of roses،In short, my room is clean and clean.
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